I'm sure there is a perfectly reasonable explanation for this. What that explanation is? I don't know, but I'm sure there is one.
mirror mirror on the wall, who is the loneliest of them all?
why you my prince, no one can compare to the loneliness of the only one.
mirror mirror of melted sand, could somepony love me for who I am?
yes yes, but not for you, for someone else.
mirror mirror set in stone, will I always be alone?
no, not a chance, you shall be will others like you.
Officially cancelled.
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Wow. Pretty good. Very promising. Can't wait too read more.
But, as a side note
I think you might what to put 'holding an apple in it.' or 'holding the apple in it.'
But yeah, I really can't wait till more comes out.
4467857 thank you! And this is why pre-readers are important.
4467873 Yeah, though I am one of those 'edit as you go' kind of guys. So there are things that I miss, and fix way later. Haha. Though, i have started to get into the habit of editing before I post a chapter as well.
4467900 A habit I should get into. Now just need to get 1000 words.
4467953 Yeah haha. That is a problem I always come across sometimes. Like my first chapter in Laws only had 23 words over 1000
4467995 I did it!!
Now you have your 2nd follower.
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Make that a third. And good job!
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At this rate I'll rule the world in... 1.48 million years!
4503608 Hey, if that ever happens, make sure you spare me!
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Depends... Who is best dragon?
an another note, who is best pony?
4503667 Spike, and Applejack. . . . Haha. So, I don't want to tell you which way you should take your story but as a suggestion it would be interesting to see how other ponies, ponies that know Felt, react to Cotton.
4503685 I like that idea, personally I was planning on [AUTHORIZED PERSONAL ONLY].
also, his name is spelled C-r-a-c-k-l-e.
4503695 Haha. Ok ok. Also I noticed this
You forgot the beginning parentheses before This is serious.
4503709 Thanks!
4503719 Welcome. If I spot any other errors, I will just send them as a Pm.
4503723 My legion of proofreaders expands! I official have 1 proofreader!
4503737 Damn. . . Maybe I should have asked to be payed first (Haha. Jk)
4503737 Well, I should get back to writing, if I want to get the next chapter for Laws and Finding New Hope posted soon.
Cute. I see you were finally able to get it written. That's good.
4719905 Yeah, it's much shorter then I would have liked, but this is what I was able to do after life decided to knock me off of my feet, of course the glitch on FIMfiction didn't help much either. Oh well, time to update their character sheets. I can't wait to write more!
4719968 Yeah. Life will never be as smooth as you want it. You just have to slow down, and take these things as they come. I hate doing character sheets, Just because they are tedious, and I just ain't that good at them :/ I try to do them anyways, just in case people want to see them.
4720074 I do them because if I don't details get mixed around, have to keep organised or Cotton Storm might spontaneously become a stallion.
4720083 yeah. I have some characters that change eye colors and fur colors. All that jazz, really. Then I'll realize my mistake and have to change everything.