• Member Since 28th Apr, 2014
  • offline last seen Dec 19th, 2014

slothhugz


Hi Hi my name is JoJo and i am just a normal weird person that you will meet. I am a pegisister and I LUVZ sloths. I compete in gymnastics and its sooo fun. I just did my state meet today! BAIII!

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"I'm nothing more than just a useless Earth Pony, I'm nothing special. Not only don't I have wings or a horn, but I, a grown mare, still has a blank flank! What can I do to society? I'm nothing..."

Just a story about a back pony who is not very popular at all, but, maybe this will get her more noticed :) If you don't know who any of these ponies are...:

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

:applecry::fluttercry::raritycry:, is my story that bad? :applecry::applecry::fluttercry::raritycry:

:rainbowlaugh: that was really good, do more on it!

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I like the pacing, and especially the descriptions and names.
However, it is a little confusing though.
I was surprised that her parents liked her being an earth pony, but glad.

Nice! I just found a few grammar and capitalization errors.

:scootangel:

:yay:

4347840 lawl miranda....... awesome gif:pinkiehappy::derpytongue2:

"Congratulations Frozen Water and Icycle, it's a girl!" Grinned Nurse Sweetheart

It's a filly, not girl. Girl is human, filly is pony.

Not bad, but could use more chapters. An easily remedied problem, right?

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