My guess is that the creature only goes after sound, and since Octavia wasn't making any, it was as though they couldn't even sense her. I wonder if that was plain as day and now I just look dumb.

Anyway, was a real interesting read, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, Jay!

welp, this happened.

on note, da capo is intende as "you did it a lot of time, do it again from the beginning"; I would add just a little more detail about the fact she doing a "routine synphony" that she did a lot of times before

Not too bad, I enjoyed it! You're a great grimdark writer, as you constantly show with Lil Miss Rarity, and this story is no exception. I'll be looking forward to more!

holy shit, are you actually lil miss jay from tumblr? like lil miss rarity? like the reason why im a brony? well, this is gonna be my next read after the long ass fic im reading now!