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Pleiades


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Mysterious chunks of a majestic civilization suddenly begin landing everywhere in Equestria, in every town... save for Ponyville, who gets quite the surprise. A lonely soldier named Rogue appears, searching for "Mu". Tales of his extremely violent behavior quickly spread through Equestria, and nopony can stop him, not even Celestia.

And then a savior arrives as a blue shooting star, streaking across the night sky. Calling himself Mega Man, he seeks to bring Rogue back to his world, and possibly take Mu with him. He is armed with very powerful technology, things ponies have never seen before... and some strange beings, who call themselves Wizards, that can fuse with other beings, like ponies.

A long battle between friendship and loneliness will soon come to an end. The only problem is, both of them are packing reinforcements...

Author's Notes
This story takes place in quite a few perspectives. It's Geo's if "winged horses" or "Air Display" or some non MLP-ish vocabulary is used, whereas if "Pegasi" or "blue floating panel" is used, it's a pony's. I figure it's important to tell you, the reader, because you may be confused at my inconsistent choice of words.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 7 )

This is promising... I anticipate noise changes with MLP characters of course... I have no idea why this is so underrated, though after some thought it could be the rushed writing style. Maybe add more detail and flow to the stories... do not fear exposition and at the same time use that to give more depth?

475009
I appreciate your thoughts. I'll be honest, I think trolls attacked this fic when it was released, but I admit that I think I did it wrong; I didn't pre-write Chapters 1 or 2, I wrote them directly into FimFiction. I can see now that it was a bad idea.

475034
... Saw what coming? I'm afraid I don't follow.

475162
Yeah the direct write in might have been a mistake, trolls or no trolls.
As for what I saw coming... the words friendship and brotherbands come to mind.

476161 Ah, I see. Thanks for clarifying.

Brotherband with the Elements of Harmony!!!!!

3871961 And with that comment you have just spurred me to continue this fanfic. Good thing I backed it up! :derpyderp2:

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