Soon after the founding of Equestria, in a remote corner of the map, one earth pony dreams of taking flight. Will the force of his dream and support from his childhood friend be enough, or are the shackles keeping him grounded simply too heavy?
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A nice story. Well written, and a nice premise, though if it was meant to give me a feel, it didn't do its job.
However, I question as to why this story has more downvotes than upvotes? Let me change that...
An upvote and a favourite for you!
Sincerely,
ChrisTheCat
Geez guys, I get it, this story is a miss, but why all the hatred? A little input and maybe I could fix it! Instead I get 3 down votes, 2 ups, and 1 comment. Go figure.
I don't think this story is a miss at all. You really created some amazing characters and wonderful imagery, and I'm shocked it hasn't been more well received. I really hope to see more stories as well written as this. Keep up the great work!
Hmm, well I thought it was okay. It needs a bit of editing here and there and the paragraphs need to be a tad smaller but it should be well received. I can't really see why...