Apologies for any tears that leave my page, it is NOT intentional... not much anyways... (^) BRO HOOVES ALL AROUND MY PONY AMIGOS!
Pinkie Pie can REALLY throw a party, and the aftermath is usually pretty good, except for that one time...
Twilight is unconscious, Applejack is looking through porno mags, Pinkie Pie is, well, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash has "slightly" overdosed, Shining Armor may or may not become an alicorn, Luna is NOT a virgin, and Celestia just has a headache from all these goddam letters!
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I should report this... I HATED this and yes, I am taking this seriously. Everypony, plz do your Princess a favor and report this story... This really just went WAY too far.
4174830 Well, you should've took note at the fact that this is rated T. I hate it too, but you can't report this story just because you don't like it.
idk why some people are taking this seriously, i thought it was funny
some people just dont understand sick humor
Um, funny but...
Weird.
That's why we love it!
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Hey, I know you hated it, but I wrote this as a joke. I really hate these kind of stories too, and I was taking the mickey out of it. I also wrote this at 2am so... yeah... Sorry again.
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You my friend, are awesome. (Brohoof)
I would not call this sick humour... Except maybe the last bit with Luna and the spear.
Shining Armour's bit was the best though, imho.
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FINALLY! Someonw that gets my (extremely odd) sense of humour! Thx for the brief feedback bro
Oh, and btw, you might need a gynecologist...
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Well, if you want a more extensive bit of feedback, I have to comment that the bit with Celestia and Luna kind of ended quite strangely, confusing even. Could have been much funnier had the dialogue went on a little longer, or if Luna had escaped because of the letters crushing Celestia.
Then I take a second gander at it later on today, and I am slightly confused as to the Rarity and Spike situation. I think I know why I found it very funny the first time, but now that you bring up the gynecologist (and have me actually look it up) I am a bit hesitant to come to any critical conclusions about what went down.
Also, some * * things, I think they call them asteriks, on the sound effects of the phone ringing would make that look more like sound effects.
Last thing, a few errors here and there, just a few examples:
That should probably be "if".
Focusing on the "...but none came anywhere worse than..." part, I think "came anywhere near as bad" or "none worse than" would flow much better there.