The Doctor is plunged into an unknown world, a place of magic. But someone is behind the curtain, making sure everything goes to plan.
He also might have crashed into the Golden Oaks Library.
Hiya. 9 years in and still kicking.
The Doctor is plunged into an unknown world, a place of magic. But someone is behind the curtain, making sure everything goes to plan.
He also might have crashed into the Golden Oaks Library.
Cool.
Not sure how this is story is going to go, but it has the doctor.
Favorited!
DESCRIPTIONS ARE NICE
THAT IS ALL
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670297 I know that thing about pacing, but it's one of my many flaws.
670557 NOW IT'S THERE
673309 Y U NO BOLD
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673335 cause i no bold
MOAR
I was just skimming through the stories currently on my tracking list and I realized I forgot to comment. I might have neglected to because others have already stated what I would have (more detail would be fantastical, just moar in general) but I reread it and I do have something to add that others haven't already pointed out: there are some misspelled words. I could point them out, but I'm too lazy to. A spell-checker could find them easily anyway.
Also, wheee!
I'm now using this:
auto-reviewer.appspot.com
as pointed out by Dr. Shisno.
It's great for proofreading.
I see the potential for a neat story, but you should really work on pacing
Again, I'm sorry
And yes, I accidentally published the next WIP-chapter. It's off now.
So I've noticed that this has been on hiatus for quite some time. This is rather sad since i rather enjoyed the premise and the writing.
Hope you manage to get back to this soon
5470187 glad to hear you've liked it so far. I'm hoping to get back to it, but writing is (unfortunately) not really my biggest interest. We'll see.