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Kumare Tanamaru


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Applejack is a hard working mare. She's strong, confident, honest, and hard headed. She's also a bit hasty on who to trust. When she finds somepony harvesting apples on her farm, she immediately despises this new stallion. Even though he does start off on the wrong hoof, he makes it his quest to win the trust of this little orange mare. Perhaps even more.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 23 )

Looks cool, tracked.

Oh, and Effect: Bleed for 5 seconds
+20 fire damage vulnerability

Looks good so far, let us begin.

Why can't the OC who gets involved in these type of situations ever be female?

373973 And no random critical hits.

If she knows he wasn't stealing, why is she still mad at him?

Glad you guys are enjoying it? :rainbowwild:

It's more than just that... It's a trust issue. Would you trust some stranger in your house packing up your stuff?
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Well, that's not exactly how Applejack works. He isn't being sent to work, he offered. He's just there to help out while he's staying with the Apple family. He's not just leeching.

If someone was so stubborn they kept calling me Thief after we had already resolved that situation, I'd respond by calling them Mule. :ajbemused:

Good story though! Waiting for more! :pinkiehappy:

Bloody...Applejack and her...names...:twilightangry2:

An upvote and a favourite for you!
Sincerely,
ChrisTheCat

Quite a good read. Keep up the good work Kumare! :pinkiehappy:

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I liked the story but...could you at least try to write in a southern dialect? And I don't mean misspelling lots of words either. :twilightblush:

Also, this is a lot like Scorched ^.^ Did you draw inspiration from there too?

No... I don't know what you're talking about. This was all out of my head. And what do you mean southern thingy... I tried... :fluttercry:
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Comment posted by Kumare Tanamaru deleted Aug 17th, 2014

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Will you share what "You've wanted for a really long time"?

I'm back. And so are my stories.

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