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The PatioHeater


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Twilight takes her and her friends through her inter-dimensional portal to discover new possibilities (although Pinkie Pie has already done all that).
When they reach the other side and find very little, they return home a bit disappointed.
However, this will reveal something about Equestria that I'm sure none of us would like/find a little annoying.
NOTE: this story has a random build up to it that lasts a while but I tried to make it entertaining (if I didn't do this then the story would be really short). And it's not so much about anyhing in particular, just another random idea I had that I wrote instead of sleeping.
WARNING!!! This contains tickling induced urination.

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Comments ( 8 )

Interesting...

It has some possibilities here.

Open communication between them, and find a way to get the ponies to Earth and a way to get humans to Equestria also.

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If I didn't already have so many other ideas I'm working on I would, but I can't do any more unless my mind will be too full of Ponies before my exams in summer, and they might be a little more important...:derpyderp2:

Also, the cover art that I "drew" makes me want to carry on writing this so bad because I like it so much! But no, don't tempt me!:twilightangry2:

373971 The tourettes guy from youtube. He gets mad at his son and swears like a mad man.

*Tourettes guy sitting at table, eating fish sticks*
Tourettes guy: "These fish sticks are as hard as tits!"
His son: "Who's tits have you been feeling that are hard?"
*Awkward pause*
Tourettes guy: "Fuck you!" :rainbowlaugh:
Also, good story, good read. BOB SAGGET!

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I still don't really get what you're talking about, but thanks anyway for liking this random completely imrpovised thing I wrote in a single evening when I could have been writing better stuff!
That sounded sarcastic, but it wasn't! Thanks again!:twilightsmile:

how about properly marking Paragraphs?
you could always signal segments with the line instead(much easier to follow if you had done that.


on the other rubbery hoof, it's still a fun story,
even if there is a bit much of distraction in the beginning.
unless the rest is just irrelevant to that story instead?


Could you by chance write a sequel, since this story is marked Complete?
I want to see what happens on both ends of this.
what happens to the Ponies?
what happens to the people in the SGC, after this revelation had occured?


So many Questions, but little to nothing on the Answer department

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