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The PatioHeater


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After an incident with a bolt of lightning, Twilight is thrown from Equestria and lands in Earth. Rainbow Dash, with the help of Lyra and a strange Earth Pony, must try to find her before it's too late, and bring her BACK TO EQUESTRIA!

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Comments ( 28 )

This looks good, I love BTF. I'll have to track so I can look at it later. :twilightsmile:

DeLorean incoming...

If there isn't a DeLorean or a decent plot...I will be sorely disappointed.

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I'll try not to disappoint, but it's harder than I expected since I haven't seen the films in months and am doing this from memory. So this may take a while to finsh...

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Word didn't seem to like Pegasi, but I'll change, just for you!:twilightsmile:

And also, using her full name implies urgency i thought...

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Good idea with the I! I so hope I can do this this justice...

Okay, I hope this is up to your standards! critism would be nice as usual guy who checks my stuff hasn's seen back to the future somehow...

ENJOY!:twilightsmile:

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im afraid i have no idea what you're on about! :derpytongue2:

I am waiting for the obligatory 1.21 Jiggawatts pun...

Hey, his cutie mark should be the Flux Capacitor. I saw no mention of his cutie mark. WHERE IS THE CUTIE MARK?!

:pinkiegasp:

Tracked. How could I not?

This is very good. Will we see a bit from Twilight's pov? Anyway, I look forward to reading more!:pinkiehappy:

I would like to listen to Johnny B. Hoofed... know any musicians that do requests? :pinkiehappy:

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I don't. do you? spread the word, maybe we can get it made!:pinkiehappy:

Is the story in hiatus? I've been waiting for a while...

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Sorry about the wait, I know it's been ages since I put any of this up. I havent been vevry inspired for this story at all recently so I've been focusing on the other stories I'm writing. In fact, I might have forgotten about this! But you have just reminded me, and since you have made the effort to ask I feel I should carry it on!
I shall get started momentarily!:pinkiehappy:

I may continue this in a different story, if I can be bothered/finish all my other stuff (HA! like I will ever finish all these ideas I'm already writing).

Hope you enjoy!!!:pinkiehappy:

AW SNAP, time to go back to the future of Equestria. :pinkiehappy:

This is some good work indeed. Please do keep it up. :rainbowlaugh:

9 days later, I finally get the time to read this...
...well that was anti-climactic. I really do hope you continue this, I was expecting a big epic full of twists and turns, something that would do justice to the movies. But I guess it's good if you consider this the first movie, that will (hopefully) be continued.
Even if it is unfinished, you deserve a cookie (:::). Nice story. :derpytongue2:

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Thanks! And I might continue it, but my idea for a contiuation would be very random indeed and probably wouldn't be very back to the future-y. there will still be a DeLorean and everything but I have no idea...
But saying that, I'm not sure when/if I would write that as I have plenty of other ideas I'm currently writing and frankly I'm enjoying them more. so don't get your hopes up...:derpytongue2:

364967 This "first story", as I've said, is very familiar to the first movie of BTTF. You could continue by making your version of the 2nd (hopefully also the 3rd) movie. You could include set-pieces from the movies, just make your own version (you nailed this with the Gala and Johnny B. Hoofed). I guess maybe in the 2nd movie the future could be discorded Ponyville, or even better, have technology. You could have hovering scooters, and other neat things. I haven't watched BTTF in many years, so I can't help you much more.

On another note, the musician that said was working on making an actual Johnny B. Hoofed said he was too busy with personal life, and probably won't finish it. Knightmaren11 (working on the game MLP: Rise of Vicis) replied to me, and said he put it on his list of music to do, so don't lose hope yet.

wow this is soo like the actuL MOVIE way to go.

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