A Day in the Life of Ditzy Do

by Rainbow_Dash_14008

Princess Celestia's Visit

After enjoying their delicious blueberry muffins, Dinky spoke up.

"Mommy! Someone in my class today told me that Princess Celestia is coming into town today!" she said.

"Oh really?" Ditzy asked, "Why would Princess Celestia be coming here today?"

"Probably to see Princess Twilight," answered Dinky, then her eyes lit up, "Mommy, can we go see her?"

"Not today Dinky," replied Ditzy, "she's probably coming to talk to Princess Twilight about something important. We shouldn't bother her."

"Please?" begged Dinky.

"Dinky," said Doctor Whooves, "you heard your mother. Maybe next time."

Dinky then got a mischievous grin on her face, "Well I'm going anyway!" she cried, then bolted out the door before her parents could react.

"I'll get her," Ditzy sighed, then flew out the door after her daughter.

Their house wasn't very far from the library where Princess Twilight was staying, so Dinky made it before Ditzy could catch up. When Ditzy finally caught up, Dinky was in the middle of the road gawking up at Princess Celestia.

Hurryingly, Ditzy ran up to Dinky and bowed to Celestia.

"So sorry Princess," said Ditzy, "my daughter is very energetic. I'm sorry if she troubled you at all."

"It's quite alright," replied Celestia, "she hasn't given me any trouble, I just got here. Now hello little filly, what is your name?"

Dinky stared for a moment before replying, "I'm Dinky, Dinky Do."

"That's a lovely name," said Celestia, then she turned to Ditzy, "what is your name?"

"I'm Ditzy Do," said Ditzy.

Celestia was about to respond when the sound of a door opening stopped her.

"Princess Celestia!" It was Princess Twilight Sparkle, "What did you want to talk to me about?" Twilight turned and saw Ditzy and Dinky, "Oh, hi Derpy. What are you doing here?"

Celestia looked puzzled, "Twilight, did you just call this pony Derpy? She told me her name was Ditzy."

"Oh, it's just my nickname," butt in Ditzy.

"Well it sounds rather a rude nickname," responded Celestia, "Why is that your nickname?"

"It's because of my eyes," mumbled Ditzy, "It's a medical condition. They look, well, derpy. So everypony calls me Derpy Hooves."

Dinky's eyes widened, "You never told me that mommy! I didn't know other ponies were picking on you! It sounds just like how other ponies pick on me at school for not having my cutie mark!"
` "Dinky, shhh," mumbled Ditzy.

"So you have lived like that for a while? With your eyes like that?" Celestia questioned, and Ditzy nodded. "

"It would be much easier with your eyes not like that correct?" asked Celestia, and Ditzy nodded again.

"I just want to be normal again..." mumbled Ditzy.

Princess Celestia smiled, then a magic aura surrounded her horn as she bowed her head to Ditzy. When her horn touched Ditzy. Ditzy began to glow.

"Mommy?" gasped Dinky.

When the glow stopped, Celestia raised her head and Ditzy opened her eyes. Something seemed...different. Dinky gasped.

"Mommy! Your eyes!" She exclaimed.

Ditzy looked around. Her vision, was normal. She saw her reflection in the window, and gasped, then a smile spread across her face. Her eyes were normal!

"Thank you Princess!" she exclaimed.

"Wow, congratulations Der-er-Ditzy!" said Twilight.

"You are very welcome," replied Celestia, "now if you'd excuse me, I need to take care of important business with Twilight."

"Oh course!" said Ditzy, and she and Dinky started walking home, eager to tell (or show) Doctor Whooves the news.

That was probably the best day of Ditzy's life. And nopony ever called her Derpy Hooves again.

THE END

I hope you guys liked my very first fanfic! Thanks for reading!

Comments

[Silver_Cloud123]

Nice but.... I'm a firm believer of the name Derpy Hooves.
Other than that, great!

[Rainbow_Dash_14008]

4090831 Thanks :)

[Christian_Silvermoon]

It was a lovely read, and in fact, I decided to narrate it for my first few episodes of a YouTube series I'm doing called Fanfiction By The Fire.....I hope you'll enjoy the video, I did my best to read it clearly, though rather unfortunately I did stumble a couple of times, in the video description, you're page, this story, and this site is linked, I also commented within the video itself. It's fantastic for a first fanfiction, and I certainly love the fact that you chose not to make Ditzy unintelligent, over all, I'd have to say 9 out of ten, (due to a few silly mistakes, but otherwise it's perfect). Thank you, Rainbow_Dash_14008 for producing this work of art...also, I suppose I'll be fallowing you on here from now on! :P

Sincerely,

Silver Dreams

(AKS Christian "Krissy" Silvermoon)

P.S. You may request that I remove the videos at any time, I wouldn't want to be a bother!

[Rainbow_Dash_14008]

4730077

Hey. I know that this is a late reply, but I just saw your comment, and watched the videos.

I'm speechless. I thought that that this fic was buried in the piles of fics on this site, never to be seen again!

Glad you enjoyed! And I'm still confused and wondering why the heck you made a video about this fic.

[Christian_Silvermoon]

4842539 Well, I found the story at random, and thought it was a really sweet story, and my channel doesn't have much on it to be honest. I had been wanting to read an MLP fanfiction for a while now and personally I think the name "Fanfiction by the fire" has a nice ring to it...it was a short story...first one I came across but after reading it I didn't bother to look any further, I'd found the story I wanted to read. It's a lovely work of literature, and though there are a few silly mistakes here and there, everyone screws up and grows stronger from them....I just really really liked the story, and so I had to, ya know? I just HAD to :P

You're about a month late, but how could I forget the story? Or the videos? I actually checked my notifications everyday waiting for your reply, eager to see if you thought I narrated well, or wished I take the videos down, I would've understood either way, but trust me, it was a fantastic story!

And with my long, long, long, looooong comment nearly completed (lol silly me), I leave you with two recommendations for MLP fans everywhere...

A program called "Desktop Ponies" which makes ponies walk around your screen (yay)

And a Firefox/Chrome addon called "Ponify" which replaces words on websites with their brony equivalents, I thought it was cool, but it gets confusing when your actually reading something that already uses those words :P
Thanks for replying, I was so excited to see you replied, as of now, you're the first person who's ever spoken to me on teh site ^.^

Sorry for talking too much...my ADHD I suppose XD