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uz_mike222


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Fleur de Lis, the famous pony model in all of Equestria, falls in love the most unlikely Stallion: Scramble, who is a famous writer, though, only his name is famous. Most of the story goes through Scramble's point of view due to his lack of knowledge in "the dating game."

A/N: This is a short story and Please do not ask me to continue this. This story was just an experiment on my writing abilities for other genres I have not written for.

Edit: I know it's rushed as I'm not really awesome-possom (yes I did just write that, Deal With It) with short stories, let alone romances. I will be uploading a new cover image when I can scan and upload it onto my hard drive and then color it, but until then, I will just stick with the cover image I have on now.

Edit 2: Just put up my own personal image as the cover but it's not hand drawn and I just randomly found them on google images and put them together on MS Paint, the only tool I have FOR NOW.

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Little bit rushed, but still entertaining in its own right.

370900 Haha, I know. I'm not good at writing short stories as much as I am writing stories with chapters in them, not to mention this is my first time ever writing a full on romance story, so there's that also. Anyway, thank you for reading my story and thank you for commenting on it.

Rushed, but was really nice, we sorta got to look into his life, his friends and possible love life, Great story :pinkiehappy:

371026 Just refer to why it seems rushed to my comment above, but I thank you for taking the time to read my short story and commenting on it.

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To be honest, I'd be interested in seeing this as a multi-chapter fic. From what I've seen, it looks interesting enough.

371196 And I have to be honest with you: This story was just an experiment to see whether or not I could write out a short story with romance as the genre, and if you hadn't noticed, I used the events at the Gala from episode 26, which in itself was an experiment and was pretty tough. But in a future story I'm working on, I will definitely be referencing this one since it also uses the Main Character, along with a few members of the Mane 6.

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I might just take a look at it when you post it, then.

371389You're going to have a long while before I post it.

I loved it! a little fast-paced but nonetheless really good :twilightsmile:

372954 I know it was a little fast and there wasn't much I could do without making even longer, and I didn't want to drag it out any longer. I thank you for taking the time to read my story and commenting on it.

This was pretty cute and good.

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