Before Ditzy's Eyes

Everypony knows Ditzy Doo. She's the mailpony, of course. But Ditzy has a secret. Something nopony knows.
How did Ditzy's eyes become the way they are?

Chapters (4)

Chapter I · 10th Mar 2014 · 383 words
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Chapter II · 10th Mar 2014 · 501 words
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Chapter III · 10th Mar 2014 · 748 words
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Chapter IV · 11th Mar 2014 · 959 words
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Dustin Lange

Dustin Lange #1 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · · Chapter III ·

Not bad, not bad.
It needs to be much longer for me to fave. But it did squeez a like out of me.
I will be wating for more.
*Sits patiently.*

TEK101

TEK101 #2 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · · Chapter III ·

Interesting enough, but need to read more before making a decision on how I feel.

RainythePegasus_Archive

RainythePegasus_Archive #3 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · · Chapter II ·

although I don't like this ship, it sounds cute so far. ^_^

RainythePegasus_Archive

RainythePegasus_Archive #4 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · · Chapter III ·

so cute so far, I'll be wating for the rest.

frostingblossom

frostingblossom #5 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · · Chapter III ·

soarin
*squeeee*
I must admit, I'm an absolute sucker when it comes to reading romance novels. I don't tend to care who is being shipped with whom, as long as said novel is well written. And the author has done a fine job of such.

DerpyHD

DerpyHD #6 · Mar 11th, 2014 · · · Chapter III ·

4066057 Thanks! I really appreciate the feedback guys. This is my first ever fanfic, and the reactions are great! Really appreciate it. If you liked this, go look at Ditzy's Eyes by LolCyprus. He's a close friend of mine and a great author,