Princess Celestia, while strolling through a clearing on the grounds of Canterlot Castle, is struck by a stray poison dart meant for test specimens in an Indian Practice Group. With Celestia withering away into nothing, it's up to Princess Luna to take on the responsibilities of her elder sister. But when Luna is scarred by her sister's condition, she shuts herself inside a small home in the Everfree Forest, and nopony can coax her out, Twilight places herself in the royal seat. Can Twilight rule the kingdom as smoothly as Celestia did, or will the power rush to her head and make her rule with an iron hoof?
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Author's Note: This story has, so far, been written from a mobile device. My computer is down for repairs, and it is extremely difficult for me o write clearly on such a small screen, yet I decided to give it a whirl. This.. Has not worked out so well, so I am setting this story as "On Hiatus" until I can edit and crap. It will be tagged as "Incomplete" when I feel it is appropriate to add more chapters. I await your criticism on this and the new version of this with an eager ear.
The chapters are WAY too short! I mean, I like it, but it shows laziness to make the chapters so short! Regilar chapters are often 2500-3500 words in the best stories. I like the emotion you wright with, though. Nice job!
Well now, that wasn't too bad. To be honest I think you had a great concept. You must certainly continue to write this. Please.
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661193 As mentioned in the description, this was written using a mobile device, as a proof-of-concept.
900577 That's alright. I used to wright stories with my iPad, but the stupid auto spell correct kept messing me up.
