Seabreeze had always been a harsh leader until Fluttershy showed her how to be caring for others. Now her son is commandeering for the first time, and when he goes down the same path and ends up losing part of his pack, his mother comforts him. She tells him of a time when she made the same mistakes, and an old friend helped her out, though at the time they really weren't.
Rated Teen because I don't know what constitutes it being Teen or Everybody.
My very first FiMFic story, written right after the episode on my phone. Enjoy.
Interesting Facts: No proofreaders or editors, and I actually couldn't find a cover image. Oh well.
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I know it's short, but that's because I have never actually written something with the intent of it being published here. I hope you all like it.
...just a comment: Seabreeze is a MALE breezie - all over the episode, Fluttershy refers to him as "he", and the one who dubbed him was the same dude that gives the voice to mr. Cake.
4023873 I'll gp through and fix it in about an hour, I wasn't sure at the end of the episode so I just went with the general "its probably a girl"
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Was gonna post about that same error, though it's been done by you, so there's really no need for me to make another.
And for you, author. No editor/pre-reader? Need someone to fix that?
4090861 Maybe if I ever find the time to write again :3