You all know the Internet, if a Show, Game, Movie, etc. garners any sort of popularity there will be fan fiction of it. For the most part these stories are perfectly harmless and can be enjoyed safely with no worry whatsoever. However, there are times where these stories can take a life of their own and it's about then that one should be concerned. Because, for some strange reason, these stories have a strange tendency to attempt to break into the canon of the work and change it to fit itself.
This is where the Knights come into the picture. They are an organization made to protect canon and the original ideas of the creators. They are a group with a long detailed history that would take much to long to explain in this description.
Our story starts on October 1, 2010, our hero for this piece, Isaiah Aarons, is about to learn of his new assignment, Protecting the cannon of the Upcoming Hasbro show "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic"
He's less then excited.
- Member Since 24th Mar, 2012
- offline last seen Sep 4th, 2021
Yoh_3
Yoh_3 is a brony from South-West Missouri writing stories that he hopes aren't crap. Read and see if his hopes are justified.
Yoh_3
Joined 24th Mar, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Material Defender · 48k words · 88 7 · 3.1k views
- 2ndGearSage · 86k words · 1,238 60 · 21k views
- AutoKnight01 · 63k words · 130 4 · 5.1k views
- Dalek IX · 27k words · 283 5 · 9k views
- Amarvax · 4.5m words · 377 52 · 23k views
- More Dakka · 84k words · 212 18 · 7.4k views
- Verbose Soubriquet · 123k words · 725 19 · 21k views
- Flammenwerfer · 269k words · 1,603 57 · 30k views
Chapters (4)
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.08 seconds
Total duration
947 users online
1,307,320 hits today, 1,892,089 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Wow. A lot like my fan fic. . . strange.
362101
Hmm . . . so it is, very strange.
So any ideas on how I can improve it?
362215 Well. . .I can't just give out ideas. It certainly isn't original (obviously but probably not your fault) or popular. Not to offend you that is. Hey have you ever thought about working with another writer?
You know canon only has two N's, right?
362426
doh shoot going to have to fix that
My attention... You have it.
Just the concept, really. Haven't read yet. Will be back.
362426 362438 Uh, canon has only one 'n' in the middle, and one at the end when used in this context. The description needs to be fixed. 362300This site is not about competition at all. Share your ideas so he can become a better writer. It's not like your ideas are trade secrets.
Sounds interesting.... defiantly tracking.
363449
So what do you think of the first chapter?
Anything that seems weird, anything that might need to be fixed?
363488
Well, you're defiantly asking the right questions. Honestly, there is really not much to fix--besides some odd choice of spacing placement. There's an interesting pattern of a space right after a quotation mark (ex: " pretty much, whenever you're ready"). If there was anything else your story needs, I would say it'd be more description. The dialogue outweighs the amount of description you have, which is generally not a good thing. As I say, a story made mostly of speech is a script. Other than that, your story is looking good. I love the concept of these "Fiction Knights" you've made, and can only imaging what kind of mess this Isaiah is going to get himself in. I'm definitely wondering where you're going to take this.
Comments and Criticisms are greatly appreciated so give me all ya' got.
this is great! I wonder what Isaiah will think what happened. Perhaps he'll find out it's only a flashback.
Well this took me about two weeks to write.
Again, tell me what ya' think. Criticisms are greatly appreciated.
For some reason, I feel like I'm in a paradox of sorts. A fanfiction about a guy defending canon from fanfiction? So much brainhurt. Bah, I guess that's what I get for thinking too hard...
Please sir can I have some comments or criticisms? My story won't get better without them.
My only comment is keep up the good work you're doing just fine
Sincerely the Doctor
scranton.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw3579-1331068939480622.jpg
So they just except it? Just like that? no arguing, strife, confusion, world explosion, or anything else?
scranton.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/img/mlfw4576-1335644933898.png
I know If I found out that millions of people were watching almost every move I make on a daily basis I'd freak out. I'd also freak out if I found out a friend that I've know for 15 years was sent from another world to protect mine. I'm pretty sure that millions of other people would freak out too. Well, either that or get excited or have some sort of reaction besides what was basically 'Cool story bro... where's my hayfries?'.
Other than that, it was a pretty good chapter.
589246
Would it make you feel better if I said I'm going to expand upon their reactions next chapter?
Also, technically, Twilight has only know him for 13 years, she just knows he has been there 15.
590405
Huh, I forgot about that little age detail. And yeah, it does make me feel a bit better that you're expanding on their reactions. arch.413chan.net/MLP_-_Luna_-_You_Make_Luna_Happy-(n1297486947649).jpg
Can't wait to see what you're going to do next.
Okay, bit of an update
I've started another story (which can be found here... Why yes this is shameless self-promotion, why do you ask?)
I've somehow became an editor for another story (Right here)
I've been listening to this damn near religiously
and I should get my butt in gear and write the next chapter soon.