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Super Dragon

In this familiar tale Spike, a strange visitor from a distant planet meets and falls in love with Rarity.
Although i used the comedy tag on this I consider it more humor than comedy. At the very least I hope it amuses you.

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oaxaca

oaxaca #1 · Feb 25th, 2014 · · ·

The story is actually quite nice, but you tend to jump from one moment in time to another with no transition, making things kind of hard to understand. Its like you got lazy to say "and spike began working at a newspaper". It just happens out of nowhere.