With the Cakes' housing their newest baking apprentice, mistakes are bound to be made. Fortunately, Mrs. Cake is very forgiving, and Pinkie promises never to do it again.
Except when that promise is broken. Catastrophically.
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this is sad, but also a great story too
Wait, so did the Cakes die? I didn't catch that part if they did or didn't, it seemed unclear. This story was terribly sad and even though I was pretty sure how it ended I read it anyways. One thing that I might suggest is continuing it another chapter, or adding in a little more. The end seemed rushed to be honest. The short ending hit the mark, but felt rushed all the same.
Great story though and I liked it. The beginning had me thinking she was watching the two babies burn away before the smoke made her pass out. But, ehh, yeah. They were just cookies instead... Heh heh.
So did the cake's die, or did she just burn the gingerbread cookies, or both, it was kind of unclear, but either way it's still a great story
4085412 4003886 Yes, so as a filly, she burned the gingerbread cookies, but as a teenager, the Cakes did die and burn in the fire. Now that I think back on it, that was pretty unclear.
4085627 Well it's still a great story.