• Published 18th Feb 2014
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The Fish and Chippery - Blossomfalll



Never ignore your warnings, they will change your life forever. Perhaps like what happened to me, my fingers have disappeared leaving me with stubs, and I seem to have disappeared from the hospital I was temporarily in, on soft spring grass.

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Chapter 2

The pony had taken me to a small clinic, and gotten my leg patched up, then took me a police station. I was still trying to talk to him. It was very strange how I could understand him, yet he couldn't me, but then again my mouth had just gotten cooky and i still couldn't form the right sounds. I yawned realizing I was really tired again, and unwillingly fell asleep.

I woke up the next day, nearly in the morning with the sun shining in my eyes. "Ah.. That was a odd dream." I said, or at least I thought I said. I sat up yawning and looked to the side. Why was I behind bars?!? I asked myself suddenly, and then it hit me. That was not a dream at all, if it were it wouldn't have been so vivid! Slowly I bring my gaze down to my hands. I yelp, when I see that they are still hooves. I didn't want hooves, I wanted my fingers back! To be able to pick things up. To go back.. Home.... I thought, sniffling. Would I ever get back home? I silently cried. What had I done to deserve this? To become a... PONY BABY! I thought letting out a whimper of frustration.

Somebody came in, I realised to them I must have really sounded like a baby.

"Aww poor baby. Are you hungry?" She said, in baby talk, and cooed. I think she was a nurse, that's where I must be, some type of orphanage or something in a hospital. I thought, looking around and seeing other cribs. She came closer to me and I looked at what she was carrying in her mouth. It was a baby bottle. Even though I was hungry, I silently prayed she wasn't coming to feed me with it. She was. She stuck it right in my mouth and to my protest, wouldn't take it out, I tried closing my mouth, but that jus got milk on me. Giving up, I started sucking on it, and found it wasn't half bad. It was sort of creamy, and rich. I still didn't like that it was out of a bottle, but I couldn't do anything about it, now could I?

If I'm stuck here forever... At least I'll grow up eventually.. Right?.. I thought, hoping that I wouldn't be. The milk seemed to have an calming effect on me, I didn't feel so worked up anymore. Odd...

She stopped feeding me and smiled. "There now see? You're safe here, I'm not going to hurt you, and neither will anybody else."

Why should I believe that? After all I was stuck in a land of... Aliens...

I gazed up at the pony and she smiled again and walked away. I waited for her to get out the door and looked around at the crib bars. If I'm right, this is one of those cribs you can just push down, I know escaping is useless, after all I am stuck in this helpless body, but I do want a chance to look around. For all I know, I'll be stuck like this for the rest of my life!

I hesitantly get up on two legs, wobbling, and force the crib wall bars down, after some effort. I look around and climb down, wondering how I held on to the edge with hooves. No reason to question though, this whole thing is impossible. I land flat on my body and start crawling towards the door, which to my luck had been left open. I slowly come out the door. Time to observe this new world.


When I got out of the hospital, I looked around. Perhaps I was hallucinating, but it felt too... Real. Scurrying across cobblestone I crawled as fast as I could, which amazed me, because how could a pony crawl? Watching other ponies walk towards me, I hurried into a bush. I was quite tired even though I only crawled for a few minutes, and didn't get very far. I sit down to rest and start thinking about home. Here I was in a strange world, one that I've never even heard about! What would my family think? My friends? I break out crying.

I rarely cry. Why was I crying? Why was I getting tired so easily? To my horror I realise my mind was turning baby-like too, not just my body, of course my body though, was a white foal with purple hair. A foal as in a baby pony. If I was stuck here I'd have to grow up all over again. Go to kindergarten again. Do everything I've done, again! But this time without the people I loved.

Author's Note:

Sorry this took so long ,~, it's not done but it took so long I feel like you guys deserve it. I wonder how this got nineteen likes while my better written story, on another account, got three likes and one thumbs down. Huh.

Comments ( 12 )

what whas your other story called i whould gladly read it :)

4967782 I'll move it to this account probs.

Not sure if Equestria Out Of Nowhere really meshes up nicely with Wake Up Am Horse, when the latter happens before the former. :unsuresweetie:

It took you a long time to make a second chapter this long. Okay then.. Nice story so far

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They're tropes. "Equestria Out of Nowhere" is where the hero is transported with little warning into Equestria. "Wake Up Am Horse" is... basically what it says on the cover. Stories where someone wakes up and they're a pony. Usually said hero gets sucked into Equestria, then turns into a pony, but there are a few stories where the reverse is true. I'm not sure if they work well though.

5218341 Oh

I don't really remember what I was writing xD

Guys, I'm sorry I take so long to write. I'm not a writer, but an artist, and I'm having writers and artists block. X)

5238756

Well, you want to write something or there wouldn't be anything to be blocked from. What sort of thing do you want to write, but can't seem to manage to do so?

5240718 I want to write, the problem is I don't know what to. XD

I think it's because I've been so busy with school and homework and I went to a different country for vacation, that I just haven't had much time to think about anything else.

5260541

So... write about that! But no seriously, while you can use busyness as an excuse not to write, busyness you can't avoid is a good reason not to write. Just be careful about school... easy to mess up there and end up like me. (And that doesn't necessarily mean you won't mess up if you work harder!)

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