Theogony
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Och! ('
'); Would anyone like to tell me what I did wrong so I can correct it?
Was it the Mature and Sex tags?
Or the crappy writing
Or did I type down something that was unforgivably offensive?
I'd like some idea on what I did wrong, so I can fix it, and make this readable. Please ('
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Doesn't seem too bad to me, dialogue feels a bit stunted along with other things that experience will fix. Also, second-to-last paragraph: "on his broken thrown"