• Member Since 24th Dec, 2013
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Rainbow Dash finds herself with a strange stallion she falls in love and needs him but when Rainbow meets somone who can keep up in a race he is more of a compition then a cutie stallion she loves him he loves her but can they make it work with eachother?

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Run on sentence description is very hard to read

i dont see what the problem is really, its got a good plot so farr, sentences are a little lengthy but i like it so far

4011437 i know i have run on sentences it is one of my many problems when writeing but i thought it would be nice just to make a little story.

its a good story tho, do u like horror?

read mine

4033797 k i will when i get some free time may be a bit been working alot :/ damnit life

4033797 and it wont let me read it cant find it

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