Rainbow Dash finds herself with a strange stallion she falls in love and needs him but when Rainbow meets somone who can keep up in a race he is more of a compition then a cutie stallion she loves him he loves her but can they make it work with eachother?
Run on sentence description is very hard to read
i dont see what the problem is really, its got a good plot so farr, sentences are a little lengthy but i like it so far
4011437 i know i have run on sentences it is one of my many problems when writeing but i thought it would be nice just to make a little story.
its a good story tho, do u like horror?
4011851 yes i do
read mine
4033797 k i will when i get some free time may be a bit been working alot :/ damnit life
4033797 and it wont let me read it cant find it