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It's been a month since Rainbow Dash and Twilight started dating. To celebrate their anniversary, and make it a day Rainbow Dash will never forget, Twilight performs a special spell, hoping it will give Rainbow Dash her ultimate fantasy.

Yes, this is my first official TwiXDash fic.

No, there is no sex. Hints to it, but none in the actual story itself.

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Yep, that was fun. :rainbowkiss:



ERMAGERD!

You said there was no sex... -__-. Screw that, it was so cute :)

FINALLY! A TwiDash story without the 'Sad' tag! :pinkiehappy:
Don't get me wrong, I love sadfics. All but one of my stories are sadfics. But damn, after seeing sadfic after sadfic after sadfic, you tend to get sick of it. I'll be sure to read this sometime today!

I know it’s weird to have romantic feelings for a fictional character

so RD= any Brony/clopper
and Twi= <whichever pony aforementioned Brony likes>
except, you know, the pony probably isn't really a human, and the clopper would NOT chose the human form (if they are sane)
uhh...:pinkiehappy:

THIS IS GOOD!!! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:But a bit lacking in the correct details :twilightoops:
Rose eyes for dash, mustard coat for Do but damn good job overall.

So much Twidash recently. This trend must continue!

very cute my friend, very cute indeed

1402056

Oh dang, yeah I never really looked at her fur as mustard, but I see it now. Thanks for the heads up :twilightsmile:

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Oh, I just noticed your name...:facehoof:
I'm a big Patriot fan but I won't hold it against you.
I look forward to what ever else you write.

Spike was right, Twi. As usual. And you totally breezed over that. Oh, well. :moustache:

I think a nice punchline would have been Twilight transforming while they were standing on a cloud. Touching would give way to funny when Twilight's eyes shoot open, she falls through the cloud screaming and flailing, and Dash has to save her. Amusing that the very moment she's no longer Daring Do, she'd be in peril. :twilightblush:

*rapes the like button furiously*

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Thanks haha. Yeah I've run into a lot of Patriot fan bronies. Lot of Giants fan bronies as well, so it balances out :rainbowlaugh:

tan pegasus fighting off bests
-Pretty sure you meant 'beasts' here.

Twilight was started to go
-Tense confusion there. Get rid of the 'was.'

Other than those, I either didn't find any, or just forgot the other errors. Very cute story here. I always love fluffy Twidash. :twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

Looks promising. RIL'd.

[Read] I'm not sure what else to say other than 'really good'. Nice cute fic. Thumb for you sir. :twilightsmile:

Cute, and I'm happy with the ending. It was nice to see that RD picked the real over the fantasy...although I did like how Twi decided to bring the garments "just in case."

YES OH YES

Sweet Celestia, the cuteness is over 9000!

d'AWWWW, it's so cute! I bucking love this :pinkiesad2:

"Daring Do and the Temple of Ni" do i see a monty python referrence there? :twilightsmile:

it does make a nice change to have a cute and simple twidash to just sit and enjoy and not have to worry about sad moment or plot twists, it bit have its moment i feel were it was pushing is age rating but not to much. it was short but it did have a nice flow and its really what you should expect from a fic like this,
but still good read i enjoyed it very much and i'm giving its a "It's The Perfect Fic"

im the ponyfic critic and i read it so you do'nt have to

It really is cute, thanks for the read. :twilightsmile:

its so adorkable love love love love :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::rainbowkiss::twilightblush:

Really really cute.

twidash are some of my favroites and you really hit it out of the ball park with this story. too bad i can only like once. this is the image that kept going through my mind when twilight forgets shes a pegasis and expects to fall through the cloud, then remembers :twilightoops::facehoof:

Well, that was fun to read^^ Twilight really gets out of the way when it comes to making her loved ones happy :twilightsmile: Also, awwwwwwww..... Didnt know Rainbow had such a romantic side to her. That really was a sweet thing for her to say.

PS: Thank you for giving me a great idea for an RP^^ hehehe

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No prob, glad my story can help you with that :rainbowlaugh:

Also, thank you very much for the watch. :pinkiesmile:

1839725 like I said before, you're very welcome :twilightsmile: Looking forward to your future works^^

Such a beautiful little story of love between Rainbow and Twilight.:pinkiesmile:

Warm and fuzzy, this. I liked i! Too bad for poor Spike, though. :pinkiesad2:

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Yeah he always seems like his words of wisdom are too often ignored.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the watch :twilightsmile:

Aaaah yes, Spike is really wise beyond his years..

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