Sombra gets a new consort as the drums of conflict echo from all sides.
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Casino always wins!
I just want to see her manipulating life energys. And im concerned of her predecessors. Who was they? Where they gone? Gone mad? Slain?
4905724 It's a mystery. (▀̿̿Ĺ̯̿̿▀̿ ̿)
Wow, as far as i remember, in one of the first chapters, one of the unicorn rebel leaders wanted to take the ring off of her neck(bracelet?), before being killed.
NOW, they just let her sit in their base, with this thing on, possibly a tracking device, and not removing it.
Does not make a lot of sense.
4905729 That probably means he hasn't figured it out yet, just like the rest of his plotline.
Have Her join Sombra. When i came to this story i was expecting Sombra X TG/TF human turned rose shipping. Although that hasn't happened yet, i still hope it will. This story surpassed all my expectations, its great! and with that said, i still want to see her and sombra get together, and you should write a couple clop chapters for them, like i was expecting from the beginning.
Too many stories here in ponyland have the heroes winning and happy endings and all that jazz, why not be different and have Rose betray the rebels, and her and sombra can live happily ever after?
Have her join Sombra. Act as a double agent, feeding him info and trategies that would help her maintain her anonymity as a support for king Frowny-cloud.
Get revenge on the idiots that didn't have the brains to think that she wasn't there willingly before her abduction.
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And kill that cocky prick, Fury. I don't like him. There's something about I can't quite put my finger on, but if I did, I'd have to wash my hands.
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And im tired of foreshadowing. Withoput explanations it make this story look like hack-work.
Sombra treat Rose as future consort and spouse while leaving her to rebels. For what? To be raped? Tortured? Used? Meh.
You promised "cherry" in this story, but there no "cherrys". There is no cherrys in this cake.
I don't know why. But I want Rose to help Sombra. Make him a three dimensional character and explain to her that he's actually doing good for the empire but in a way that appears to be terrorizing the populace. Also have them hook up. Rose masturbated to him once might as well have something start between them.
I'm going with the Dark side option here! Tell Sombra everything, but not before slaying a few rebels!
This is kind of apparent. The Sombra bit at the end did not make much sense. The rebels know the collar is screwing with Rose's head yet the only rebel to try and take it off was killed during the assault. The have unicorns in the rebel base, yet none attempt to pop it off. It is all very confusing.
4910394 I'll actually address the collar thing in the next chapter, I just didn't get to it yet.
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Aw, alright. Though the bits between Fury and Sombra are still confusing. There is mention of past humans being brought over, yet Sombra acts as if Rose is expendable despite the time he put into her. I know you can come up with a possible reason, but it just seems so wasteful.
Hm. Well.
I hope that Rose will choose the right path.
And destroy the rebellion.
LONG LIVE THE EMPIRE, LONG LIVE THE EMPEROR!
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But in all seriousness, if there is one who supports Sombra, then it's me!
Let him be victorious for once and for all! I got just enough stories with him being defeated, screw that shit.
Rose should get an enlightement about how the Emire stands in the world, actual information, free of any side's bendings.
Oh well.
-Zeph
So, I guess Silver Shield is apart of a group from within the Empire, since Spyglass didn't know him, I agree that making Rose more expendable would sort of suck a lot of the sense out of the story without serious in-depth explanations.
This story is getting too confusing. We need explanations desperately. It also feels like it's dragging out now. It's completely lost the transformation angle and honestly I want to see more of Sombra trying to make Rose his consort.
Wasn't this supposed to be about Sombra needing a consort? XD
What happened to the plot!
4926701 OFF DA RAILZ
We'll be getting back to the regularly scheduled programming soon. To be perfectly honest I didn't originally plan to veer the story off into this kind of direction, but I thought it was much more compelling this way.
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Spoiler tags, an iPad user's worst nightmare.
Regardless, I still got the message and I understand, you go in the direction you think is best.
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It does. In the prior instance, the stallions were on their way out of the castle, and it's assumed that she would have gone out with them. In this instance, they want Rose to stay inside of the castle and sabotage Sombra right under his nose. Being without the collar in the latter case would be more than suspicious.