Sombra gets a new consort as the drums of conflict echo from all sides.
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I didn't finish reading yet, but... did Rose really pull a Guy Fawkes type, Gunpowder Plot of 1605, thingy? The Plot was discovered because someone from the plotters told one of his friends in the parliament that he shouldn't be there the next day. That man began to investigate and this caused the fall of the plot of blowing up the parliament.
So, now as Rose told Warm what will exactly happen, she will tell the rebels the plan, therefore screwing up everything.
I'm deeply disappointed. Let the rest of the chapter justify this, I'll edit in my reaction.
EDIT:
Well.
I know this SIlver Shield guy was a... ehm... weird creature. But now he turns out to be some kind of Lich or something...
Anyway. The first part above still stays, that particular part will bite them in the ass, hard. And Silver, well, I never liked him. Sombra probably let him die because he exactly knew what Silver became and he needed to save his kingdom.
About the things between Rose and Sombra: I'm glad we have more developement. I also hope for more, much more.
Hmm, that's it for now...
-Zeph
Aw gawd. Silver is a ghost or hallucination. Rly? Nobody wouldnt guess. Where is a pron goddamnt? You said pron but there is no pron. Wtf?
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"there'll"
Those ages, always tapping things.
Lower cased "he".
What about the story and Sombra taunting the main character?
"unaware" That they also seems to be referring to Sombra and Fury, but I get the feeling it is really pointing at the Equestrians.
Writer's block is a bitch. Glad you are still trying though, but sometimes you just need to step back and try something else.
5402114 Lots of little mistakes this time, probably because I really pushed on and wanted to get the chapter done.
And yeah, writers block is a problem for me, that or I'm just lazy. I have a definite idea of where the story is going but sometimes I find it hard to put it down into words. I have plenty of other little pieces of writing that are nowhere near finished, I might go ahead and touch those up if I'm feeling stuck.
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I am kinda the same way, but I get caught on little things like a character's name and stop right there, or a description. I have a couple things partially done but I always hit some point that I just can't get past and so move on to other things. Recently it has been SFM, Illustrator, and modding the crap out of Skyrim.
Did Warm seriously hint at this?