Sombra gets a new consort as the drums of conflict echo from all sides.
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Court games. How classy.
Sombra is starting to become relateable and even a bit likeable while still being in character for the most part. That's pretty impressive.
Oh, what's this? Sombra s gaining a personality?
Wonderful, terrific! He is growing up so fast!
I love it how the relationship between him and Rose is getting better, and this whole plan, fantastic!
I'm also glad about the whole direction of the story as of now, the rebels shouldn't have a chance!
But let's see, how will things turn out in the long-run?
Oh, almost forgot. That part in Sombra's thinking, about the castle guards and their 'gossipping'. Lol. Seriosuly, that's hilarious! Heheh.
-Zeph
This line should start with a quotation mark even though it is continuing dialog. The lack of a quotation mark at the end of the previous paragraph is correct and shows that the dialog continues.
So much for the verbal tennis.
Interesting, interesting. It seems as if our king is starting to melt a little. And all it took was a rose to crack the facets of a black heart. Those are some pretty hard thorns.
In future events Rose should take Sombra`s side. Fury is unknown factor. In the end he may use her as pawn or concubine. Rebels...horn surgery as best result.
This really deserves more views, you have an incredible talent sir
You are an extremely talented writer. In just a chapter, and a few paragraphs of Sombra's thoughts and speech, we can see who we are supposed to feel empathy for. You deserve way more views.
For some reason I can totally see Sombra saying something along the lines of... http://youtu.be/k8n74TUhAq4?t=12s
He has never lied. That is a basis for trust. A beginning.
'stretch'?