Short indeed, but better than nothing.
I wonder, what are Sombra's intentions?
Hm. I think about some mind breaking game he plays.... hm. Though i don't know why would he put this much energy into bringing our protagonist here, if he pulls this with her right after.
Oh well. Guess we will se in the next chapter, maybe?

-Zeph

Is this ganna be a Belle and Beast kinda thing?

4354371 Judging by the lack of romance tag I kinda doubt it.

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All that the lack of a romance tag means is that our protagonist will most likely resist as much as she is capable of doing so without being destroyed by Sombra. I'm actually leaning more towards the Stockholm Syndrome approach over everything else. 'Romance' doesn't necessarily mean Romance. So, probably a smart reason to drop the tag, the only way I could think he could tag it would be if the protagonist willing accepted Sombra's dark/tyrannical ways and tried to help rule alongside him. But, doubt that'd happen.

Wow, I'm just like the guy in the story! I comment on the story, a guy replies to me, and then the next day the story updates. Oh god..... AAAHHHHH!!!!!

Ooh can't wait for the next chapter!!

I don't envy the protagonist very much . Sombra created her in an image of the woman which he would like to see always near himself. But being not confident in her loyalty, Sombra can't give her freedom: the risk of escape, or treachery is too high. So he is compelled to show the cruelty, to hold her as the concubine deprived of civil rights.

The protagonist has not many exits from this situation. Or she shows the loyalty and usefulness, or continues useless fight against a superior force, dooming thereby herself to long torments and degradation.

Damnit! Why did I have to fall in love with that story and make Sombra my favorite pony?! Although, if this was really me, I would probably be bowing down at the sheer magnificence of his power, and i'd be his fuggin' concubine even though I don't roll that way.
P.S. That was hot how you described Sombra, truly a Stallion of great stature.

the final paragraph made me think: "This character is going to break really swiftly..."

6411684 most people would. Strong minds are hard to come by nowadays.

6529154 everyone has a breaking point

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Yes but some further than the others. It's just a matter of how far are you willing to push yours, for what reason.