Sombra gets a new consort as the drums of conflict echo from all sides.
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hang in there help is on the way. kind of
Ouch! Love the author's note btw
Extremely hyped for the next chapter!
More I read this, the more I think I have to go back and reread it.
All aboard the hype train, serious shit is going down! Valuable lession to Rose: never, never, never underestimate your opponent. Also, an overkill is the safest bet, I would rather have Fury sliced up into a dozen pieces than letting him die of a spear or something...
Well, I'm waiting for the great conclusion, it shall be most interesting!
-Zeph
"revealed"
"scan" perhaps?
This part feels a little awkward, I suggest rewriting.
"of"
Maybe "fly" would be a better word.
How is that known? Cause he is using Frost's body as a puppet?
He uses insults that imply Rose and Sombra had sex, which has never happened. He really needs to work on his insulting skills.
If Fury was showing signs of blood loss just minutes earlier, how is he moving around so well?
"standing"
Remove this section.
"Pegasus" isn't capitalized in this case.
The amount of punishment Fury sustains and yet keeps moving and even threatens to rape Rose seems a little out there. Unless blood mages can use their ability to stop from bleeding out and heal themselves as well.
Rose and Sombra better have some serious "make-up"? Sex in the near future!