Sombra gets a new consort as the drums of conflict echo from all sides.
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You've done an excellent job making King Sombra a sympathetic character without making him OOC.
Well, I'm locked in. Liked, faved, and waiting for more!
*Crystal Empire history books be like: Blood Rose, the benevolent co-ruler of the crystal empire, helped stop the attacks of Equestria and return the Empire to its golden age.
*Equestrian history books be like: Blood Rose, King Sombra's consort and the last surviving Blood Mage, helped solidify the mad king's rule over the crystal empire and repelled Equestrian liberation forces, who tried to free the captive citizens.
Keep up the good work I love this story so far!!
The teacher would go to the basement to lighten the mood. Seems like an odd thing to do.
This sentence makes it sound as if Rose heard something and doesn't quite fit in the context it is used in.
Need an opening quotation mark.
This sentence doesn't fit well in context.
I would like to know the minds of the Princesses in this story. It just seems unlike them to push for conflict if the citizens are happy under Sombra.
After being out of comission for over 3 weeks, this is much of a relief.
Two chapters, one of a major moving point, another of character progression and growth, I like it!
Sombra's intentions, parts of his and the Empire's past, the trouble with the Princesses, everything is slowly revealed
But there is much to be completed in this puzzle.
I approve of Rose's change of heart/mind about Sombra, took her loooooong enough. But, progression is made, I cannot complain!
Keep going, this story must be completed, with all the revelations!
-Zeph