Sombra gets a new consort as the drums of conflict echo from all sides.
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One would almost believe it could potentially be before the thousaand year disappearance, were it not for Spyglass coming from Appleloosa, which was founded just before the series start.
I find it intersting!
Wow. Just wow.
I think I will be short with my comment this time: this chapter gave an insight, a dark twist, more speculation matter and other bits for me to think on. I hope that the next chapter will come out faster than this, last one.
-Zeph
Yes Yes, Sombra is maybe planning to take away her poweres
4703070 And Luna's 'return'.
He is setting her up for something. Either to control her power or to become as twisted as he is, either way he has no good intentions at all.
LOL Sombra didn't tell her not to put her entire power into the blasts! That's why they were so powerful, she had the force of her entire magical reserves backing those blasts! XD
"We" picked up pony swear words a little too fast.
I think you took the "Ah" thing too far. Up until this point is was mostly "I" then a sudden change afterward. It also completely breaks how the character spoke in previous chapters.
Muddy and dust don't match real well.
This sentence seems unneeded.
Did you mean "rockets"?
This phrase was in the previous sentence and is repetitive.
Another repetitive line, repeated from the sentence before it.
This chapter had more meat to it compared to some previous ones. I liked it.
I'MA CELESTITE AND A LUNATE! And damn son, that's some cool ass magics, i've always wanted to fire lasers from my forehead!
4708925 just attach a spartan laser to your head then your good!
4703906 or mannipulate her
4709195 That's just a single quick burst, I want a cutting laser.
4709231 what about the Reaper laser?
4710264 That's too big, i'm talking about something pen sized with exact precision.
4711127 what about the Collectors' lasers? They're small and could be attached to a head, it's even organic, somehow.
4713819 No, bloody hell, just get me a laser watch from 007.
4716808 One laser head implant coming right up. Now where'd I put my drill?
Pew-pew-pew!
And foreshadowing. Thats all about this chapter.
Am I the only one who imagines Sombra having the same voice as Knight Lautrec of Carim from Dark Souls?
That would be 'tenets'.