Sombra gets a new consort as the drums of conflict echo from all sides.
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Hm, even more information about the actual state of the Empire.
My curiousity is at max, what are the reasons and happenings behind this all?
More, we need more, I demand more!
-Zeph
I didn't like the blood magic plot point at all but this is really getting interesting.
Hmmm... So, Sombra is sitting in the grey area or more specifically, right on the blurry border of the moral compass, somewhere from 1-10mm from the Darkside?
good stuff!!!!!!!!!!
The short description doesn't grab as much attention as this story deserves.
I overlooked it every time it popped up in the recent updates box, until someone mentioned it somewhere. I don't remember where.
umm... don't you mean bipolar?
I think everyone is a rebel. Wouldn't that be a twist?
Still no sex... I'm beginning to wonder.
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I do wonder to. Narration here are fragmented. Its good to show several scenes, united by one plotline (as in clop storys). Such narration is not for this fic.
This librarian mare(if she is the librarian) seems nice
And ze intrigues! What if what Sombra says is true?!? only time will tell. Or the writer
I love this sooooooo much!!!!!! yay ! please more!!!!!
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I want to get some narrative in there before da sex happens. You don't expect rose to jump on the first dick she sees do you? I learnt my lesson about bad pacing from adjustment.
4677134 who said she'd be the jumper? Sombra is evil, no?
4677472 That'd be the cop-out way to do it though, and probably the least interesting. Can't say I'm into that myself either. Sombra isn't the type to take what he wants at a whim, he prefers to manipulate his target. Still at the end of the day the intention is for this story to be mostly sex driven, it'll come eventually.
I'm guessing that King Sombra plans to slowly erode Rose's soul and turn her into his willing consort and living weapon.
His utter disinterest in honing his newfound magical abilities disgusts me, but given his situation I can't hold it against him.
Also is He referring to himself as rose from now on? and I suppose he should refer to himself as Anon, and i noticed, that besides the story being in second person my brain automatically switches the nouns to third, By the end i can completely forget it's a second person story, I guess part of this experience is to make you feel like you are there, but he's so disconnect from my persona that it feels disconnect.
Great story so far, I wonder where in the timeline we are, is this pre-sombra freezing in ice? or post-comeback?