• Member Since 30th Dec, 2013
  • offline last seen Sep 27th, 2014

monkeylegs


I am just some random pony liker, that has way to many unused charactors. So now I'll see how many fanfics and all that jazz I can write before I explode! Woohoo! I like potatoes. So many charactors..

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Celestia, and Luna. They have saved a world called Equestria, they are the royal alicorn sisters. There are not twins though, but triplets. They have a hated, unknown sister.

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Written by: Me
Being Proofread By: Crab Spy
Story by: Me
Everything else besides the title by: Me

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 26 )

New headcanon, yay! :pinkiehappy:

The chapters, I feel, are way too short. Hopefully you can stretch 'em out for future chapters.

Regardless, I'll be following this closely. :raritywink:

3793218 I'm bad at making chapters :P At least I'm something different fromthe average 5000 word chapter XD :pinkiehappy:

3793224

That's fine, I suppose. However, I do feel that you could've at least combined chapter 1 and 2 together. It kinda breaks the flow of the story, having to load up the next chapter page. But what do I know? I'm an idiot. :twilightsmile:

By the way, just noticed this now. Chapter 2 isn't, well, titled as Chapter 2...

I also noticed several grammatical errors scattered about. If you need a proofreader, It'd be an honor to assist in the production of this story. :raritystarry:

3793293 I'll merge those chapters together, and I'd need a proofreader XD I'm bad at finding errors and I make lots of em' :rainbowlaugh:

:pinkiehappy: This story is great please continue!

3793360 like how does that even happen, that was literally posted like 30 minutes ago

This is an amazing concept, I love it! A few grammar mistakes, but other than that it's cool!

Oh, and this part:

The ten changelings transformed into four became unicorns, two being pegasi.

It doesn't really make sense at first. Maybe you could make it like, "The ten changelings transformed into ponies. For became unicorns, and two were pegasi." Just that part, that's all. But the story is really awesome, continue it when you can! :raritywink:

3793385 I just fixed that :P Oh and I have another tab up making the next chapter :pinkiesmile:

intresting point of view

A very awesome story so far keep it up.

i feel like tears now, thanks good author
i am going to go cry now, from just reading the intro.

Or maybe continue on with tears of sad?

3793326

Don't we all?

will sell my soul for the ability to help in getting the next chapter out, will sell food to help... uh, need more ideas...
WILL SELL ALL THE PONIES

poor Chrysalis i bet she just wanted a hug:heart: should sell some hugs, that might work

LOVE DE STORY:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:
i gots you some mustaches

hmm ill give this one a shot. But I personally don't see Luna being the mean one of the two, but hey.. its your call :p

FIRST and
the ffreik:derpyderp2:

3853849 I have no idea what you just typed :D :pinkiehappy:

3853866 sry
it says the frick
my bad:twilightsheepish:

okay, i was even more excited, buuuut... yeah, this wasnt as long enough to satisfy my taste. More!

Why do people like this?! :raritydespair:

The fanfics I enjoy writing and fun with get to ignored, and this little crapfest is getting too much attention :fluttershbad:

I hate writing this in every way and it is no longer my headcanon at all... :facehoof:

4496177 You could take it down and edit it until it stops making you ashamed to live.

That's what I did

I was just got a deep feels citadel...:pinkiesad2:

canceled nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

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