Celestia's horn glowed.
"I'm going to destroy these things!" she yelled at her sister.
Chrysalis's horn glowed too, "No, you're not, I'm not going to let you." she said boldly.
The two fired lasers from their horns at the same time, Chrysalis's beam colliding with her sister's.
"Changelings, attack Luna!" Chrysalis yelled. Her army of 10 flew towards Luna, making her gasp in shock.
"LUNA!" Celestia yelled, turning.
Suddenly, Celestia's magic became weaker due to her being off focus, and Chrysalis blasted her.
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"You may stop." Chrysalis said, her sisters lying on the ground, nearly passed out.
Her changelings followed the orders, and flew in behind their queen.
The young queen walked over to her celestial sister, as the white alicorn began to slowly open her eyes.
"I'm a monster now. What you've always called me, what you wanted me to be. Now, I ask you... are you happy now?"
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Queen Chrysalis had left her castle home, to create her new empire, that will soon grow to overpower all of Equestria.
She calls her new home "The Hive" it is built by her changelings, who she has created more of. She now has 100 shapeshifting monsters at her command. Her original ten are her 'Royal Guards' who have special armor and a higher rank. Her sisters still rule Equestria, with a unicorn named Sunset Shimmer at Celestia's side.
She gazed upon her new kingdom,
"One hundred is a small number compared to Equestria's population of thousands..." she said, contemplating over this.
"What if my changelings could trap ponies in cocoons to turn THEM into changelings too..." she thought. "It'd be the perfect way to shorten their population and increase our population... this day is going to be perfect!" The corrupted queen proclaimed, her laughter echoing throughout her kingdom.
She gathered her changelings, and trained them in this matter.
"Soon Equestria will be mine... all mine..." she said, smiling.
New headcanon, yay!
The chapters, I feel, are way too short. Hopefully you can stretch 'em out for future chapters.
Regardless, I'll be following this closely.
3793218 I'm bad at making chapters :P At least I'm something different fromthe average 5000 word chapter XD
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That's fine, I suppose. However, I do feel that you could've at least combined chapter 1 and 2 together. It kinda breaks the flow of the story, having to load up the next chapter page. But what do I know? I'm an idiot.
By the way, just noticed this now. Chapter 2 isn't, well, titled as Chapter 2...
I also noticed several grammatical errors scattered about. If you need a proofreader, It'd be an honor to assist in the production of this story.
3793293 I'll merge those chapters together, and I'd need a proofreader XD I'm bad at finding errors and I make lots of em'
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Don't we all?
will sell my soul for the ability to help in getting the next chapter out, will sell food to help... uh, need more ideas...
WILL SELL ALL THE PONIESpoor Chrysalis i bet she just wanted a hug should sell some hugs, that might work
LOVE DE STORY
i gots you some mustaches
hmm ill give this one a shot. But I personally don't see Luna being the mean one of the two, but hey.. its your call :p