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I'm liking how you write Gilda. Nice work, man!
Not bad, few mistakes in grammar.
... I LOVE IT!
It's an interesting setup. Let's see what you do with it.
Woo! Filler for the win- Wait... leprechaun lingerie? ... Yes... *drool*
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Screw AM he was a douche
3822066 Ha ha, I was wondering if someone might catch that . No but seriously tho, fuck that guy. Computer, whatever.
I kind of hate Gilda now.
Careful. Karma will catch up with you.
3836664 Oooh, just wait...
It really feels like there is something missing in the italiced area, especially before the semi-colon.
Comfy looking what?
Other than those issues I gotta say I like this. Gilda progression in how she acts (though a bit despicable) seems like a natural progression with the way she has been running the show and slipping downward into more of a lawful evil pit. She is still leveled off with the fact that she still kinda cares about her girls.
3838754 Thanks for letting me know about those mistakes, I'll be sure to fix them. I'm glad you like the story, and don't worry, Gilda's spiraling isn't over yet.
i can't wait for more of this
have a fav
i loved this and the shift between Rarity and Gilda didn't bother me
3925644 Good to know, I thought it a bit risky to try that (for me anyway), but I'm glad it worked.
well this was awesome
i can't wait to read this! the summary got my short attention span-thingy....
going into my read later. This looks really good.
hmm nice touch with Aiden
though by the sound of the title I had hoped for clop...
4527951 Ha ha, that title did sound a little promiscuous didn't it? I never thought of that. Seriously.
4530847 will there ever actualy be clop in this?
4530968 I am... considering it. But if what I have in mind happens... well, you'll just have to wait and see friend-o
4532054 ill be here regardless
Only time i wanted cena to win lol.
4533172 That one was tough for me, cause I've liked Cena for years... but Bray Wyatt (IMO) is unbeatably badass, I've loved every second of his presence in WWE. Him, Rowan and Harper remind me so much of the Ministry.
An extra space in a caused the last several paragraphs to be all in italics.
Otherwise, I like the story.
4697199 Thanks for letting me know, I'm fixing it right now.
I'm so glad I found this story again it's awesome.
Pinkie is pretty messed up in the head.
Bloody hell that was more pure genius than anything I've ever experienced.
So, Pinkie's 'Conscience' is really Pinkamena, and Pinkie PIe has MPD. Gilda should be very careful from here on out; in playing mind games with Pinkie Pie she's tap dancing in a mine-field full of Bouncing Betties.
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That is such an accurate/hilarious way to describe it, I couldn't just thumbs it up!
I'm liking this potential redemption
That was fucking amazing!
Well that did NOT go in the direction I was expecting it to. This is better than what I thought would happen. Keep up the good work!
7873995 Well thank you kindly. All I have to do now is quit being occupied with some much other stuff and one of these days to ish this thing! XD
Thank you for continuing your story.
I just wonder if and/or when Gilda realizes that she's dealing with a Sybil. Maybe when she gets a hold of a blade or two.
Yikes.
Uh nevermind that second chapter post (Can no repair). That is in progress haha...