After a lawsuit she knew she couldn't lose, winnings in hand, Gilda Hof, now runs runs the most successful brothel in recent history. Not all is as it seems however, as the lives of five women, are ensnared in Gilda's web of sex, money and
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I kind of hate Gilda now.
Careful. Karma will catch up with you.
3836664 Oooh, just wait...
It really feels like there is something missing in the italiced area, especially before the semi-colon.
Comfy looking what?
Other than those issues I gotta say I like this. Gilda progression in how she acts (though a bit despicable) seems like a natural progression with the way she has been running the show and slipping downward into more of a lawful evil pit. She is still leveled off with the fact that she still kinda cares about her girls.
3838754 Thanks for letting me know about those mistakes, I'll be sure to fix them. I'm glad you like the story, and don't worry, Gilda's spiraling isn't over yet.
i can't wait for more of this have a fav
An extra space in a caused the last several paragraphs to be all in italics.
Otherwise, I like the story.