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Many years after the invasion upon Canterlot during the wedding of Prince Shining Armor and Princess Cadence, the changelings plan to attack once again under the rule of a new leader, King Metamorphosis. Metamorphosis disguises himself as a certain colt to gain power, but his plan backfires...

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I want to know what happens next!!!!

Well this is interesting. Best of luck with the next chapter.

No offence, but your grammar could be better

Interesting story. Some improved grammar and spelling would be nice. I like the idea of Metamorphosis. Do you mind if a borrow him in my story? I won't use him right away, but I might use him later. Anyways, good plot, you get a like and a favorite!

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Says the one who misspelled offense-- no offense!

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Be my guest. Go ahead and use Metamorphosis in a story. I didn't exactly create him as a character anyway. People--bronies just make gender swaps. But by all means, go ahead and use him in a story.

3880815 Alright, thanks. I'm looking forward to seeing how your story comes along.

Changeling x twilight?

I see Flash Sentry.... Now then.. this will most likely be a love triangle.... Wait. Shit.

Metamorphosis disguises himself as a certain colt to gain power, but his plan backfires...

:facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:
Of course. I see what you did there.

New chapter!!!:)I feel so exited!Please new chapter!

Wait... So all this time there is a very unethical group in their own kingdom. Now THAT is crazy.

Interesting. Who is this mysterious force behind the throne? (Rhetorical question, it will most likely be revealed later on)
The fact that Metamorphosis hesitated is revealing of the changelings. As such, here are two questions that stem from this:
1) Are all changelings innocent from birth, and are just corrupted by the rest of society?
2) How strong is familial loyalty in the changelings, if there even is such a thing in their society?

I'm going to scream if I don't find out what happens next.
Well, I'll scream anyway...
But this isn't a good scream! :raritydespair:

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