Before the rule of the princesses, ponies were split in different factions: Earthponies, Unicorns and Pegasi.
Due to certain circumstances, these groups unified under one banner, starting to cooperate in friendly manner instead of draining each others needs.
But revolutions are never friendly, and there are always oppositions.
Commander Lance Skydiver from the Pegasus's fortress in the north of Equestria is a purist: Pegasi are superior, and should rule over the others. When the unification started, he knew that he had to act quickly. He gathered a thousand fellow Pegasi Purists and went to the north. At first, everything seemed fine, but the united forces approached from south, and the siege of the fortress began.
Chapters (6)
This is really well written and I enjoyed it.
As good as it was though, your chapters are a little on the short side. Anything upwards of 1k words is a decent chapter, so that would be a pretty good goal to strive for.
Keep on writing! You've gotten a favorite/follow/upvote from me.
I'm sorry but I think you spelled "Diary" and "Phoenix" wrong.
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Thanks for the comment/favourite/follow/upvote
Yes, the chapters are short, but this is because I have to imagine what Lance knows at this point in the story (No excuse, they could be longer). I don't know if these chapters get longer in the future, but I'll try to keep that in mind.
But I am glad you liked it, it really warms my heart.
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Thanks for the correction. I try to make as few mistakes as possible, but it is difficult for me to notice them some times.
If you meant Pheonix in PheonixCircle, here a short explanation: The first time I used this username, I misspelled it. When I noticed it, I just kept it, and started to use the name like it is now, just for fun.
If you didn't mean it there: DOH, not again.
A happy new year to both of you, and thanks again^^