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The long description is supposed to help/hook potential readers into your story, it's not your blog.
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I'm sorry, but I don't know what else I could have put there. It's not a story. It's a collection of short, unpolished, unrelated scenes that I happened to like; I wasn't expecting it to get views.
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If you weren't expected people to read your stories, then why would you publish them on a public site?
I'm not even sure how this passed as a story, since it is clearly not. What you have here is a hog-podge of ideas that are all bone and no meat. (that meaning they don't have anything really connected them together. If you wanted people to read them this should have been placed in a streamlined format on your blog.
You don't even make the effort of formatting the "story" to be reader friendly. The author's words/thoughts. Something like a HR line or maybe bolded, bracketed or even in a different font compared to the actual pieces of storytelling. The actual segments are written well, and flow nicely. I do like what you have here, just not the manner in which you have displayed it.
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I published it because and only because I haven't finished any of my own writing projects, yet, and wanted to have something on the site to share when I offer to edit for people. That's all. I freely admit that it isn't a story. It's not meant to be. It's a selection of writing samples. I made a point of asking if it was okay to publish something like this, and the answer was yes. If it had not been, I would've found something else to do with these sketches.
If the in-between notes are jarring because they aren't differentiated enough, fine. Fair point. I'll see what I can do. I'm open to suggestions.
And I'm glad you liked the segments themselves! Just... know that this is here more as something to have; a resource, if you will.
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I just wanted to make sure that even though I started off a bit harsh (sorry btw.) I...I'm interested with what you have.
My vocabulary just nose dived into 5th grade.
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It's all good. Love and tolerate. I hope I don't end up disappointing
This line amused me for the bait-and-switch you set up.
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Glad you liked it
Hee. The Rarity/AJ bit cracked me up.
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Glad to hear it!