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Da faq did I just read?
Since i read your cry for help I read your story, but I didn't get the whole nipple dark matter thing. I kinda laughed at that part. all and all its was good... cured my boredom
1. The fuck did I just read?
2. Why did I read this out loud?
3. I could not stop laughing. Holy shit.
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Thanks!
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No problem! I read this out loud to a friend of mine in our Skype call, and the faces he made were hysterical!
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nice to see you!
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Your completely welcome!
WTF lmfao the ending was so random great story i love it.
she had* teleported to
Comma splices.
So... is she leaping from one floating piece of land to another, or is she leaping from one world (land) to another? Also, I'm not sure how one can lead one's own way.
god's third species
This really should be in active voice.
This line gave away the whole "troll" aspect of this fic a bit early, in my opinion.
I would have liked this fic (as a trollfic), except for the grammatical issues. Correct me if I'm wrong, but I believe you intended to take advantage of our expectation of a legitimate confrontation between Sparkle the Bearded and Satan. However, the grammatical errors, and the giveaway line detracted from the seriousness of the charade you were pulling and made me suspect I was reading a trollfic long before you pulled the big reveal. Nonetheless, lovely try. I did not expect the crotch tit sin blasters.
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You seem a really well founded fellow, mind proofreading one of my stories?
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Sure! Mind reading my story and possibly dropping a comment on what you think so far?
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I'll get to it soon, just need to get in the reading mood.