Loves Starcraft, Big Macintosh, and good grammer. PM me if you see a story with any of these! :) Currently working on a story called A House In Canterlot.
Ruby Jack, Hazy, and Scarlet Aura were excited to see the mysterious Princess Mi Amore Cadenza get married to Shining Armor, but were let down when they was no room even remotely near the castle to listen to the wedding. Then it all went wrong. The skies were black that day.
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This is my first story on this site. As a recently converted brony, all critisism is welcome. Tell me what you think!
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This is a good FanFiction that is worthy of a thumbs up! However, I have some suggestions
1. Make there be some more character description in the story(we want them to work their brains, but we don't want them to do all of the work.)
2. Describe surroundings(nuff said)
Your buddy,
BronyBoy101
Ditzy
Thanks! I'll try to describe the house in chapters to come. Right now, it has a front door and a bathroom downstairs, and upstairs it has a weapons room and a dining area.