• Member Since 22nd Jan, 2013
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Veyron


my goal is not be the best, but to enjoy what I do and to cause a few smiles along the way. Also I am a lurker, I could by on your profile page as you read this. *spooky noises*

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Equestria is a land of peace where ponies can follow their dreams, but what does this peace cost. Follow the Wardens into a secret war where the winning side decides the fate of all and where enemies may become friends.

First off I would like to thank Dusk Quill for giving me feed back and writing advice, The Descendant for historical information, and finally Hyacintho Ignis for being my editor and putting up with my less then stellar writing ability. Go give them some love ponies.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 8 )

That was pretty enjoyable mate. Plot is intriguing me very much, can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

So Luna don't know them personally except Vex?

3743741 Yep, I will explain more later on as it becomes a huge part of the story, but for now just know that this is the second version of the Wardens since Luna's banishment.

That was a really interesting plot.. what's next :scootangel:

The story is interesting and its coming along.. maybe add a little more detail when they have a mission. But overall really good! :pinkiehappy:

4598493 Thank you!:pinkiehappy: I apologize for how clunky the fight scene was... it was my first time writing action like that but I promise to try and improve.

Thanks to GentlemanPirate for editing.

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