• Published 16th Dec 2013
  • 333 Views, 4 Comments

Last pony standing - Monki



Canterlot lies in ruins after the onslaught of the Crystal Empire. Heros have fallen. One unremarkable Pony finds the courage to fight back. Gathering allies, he soon faces the seemingly invincible darkness that appears to be the root of all evil

Comments ( 2 )

This story progresses WAY too fast. The author clearly wanted to rush through this instead of making quality work.

7352026

Ok thank you for your opinion. Why would you have changed / made differently to improve the story in your opinion?

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