Something made it to the returned Crystal Empire before Shining and Cadence, that something not being at all pleased with its current situation.
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All of my yes.
I'm guessing the ending sequence is a reference to 'Fall of Equestria', no?
Anyways, always a pleasure to read of the emperor.
First rule of fighting against Nigel, NEVER CHEAT.
Those god damn injuns!
wanna update this fic soon? it would be great to read new chapter as soon as you can,because i'm very interested to see what happens next
Shows how mature I am to find that the funniest joke in this whole chapter.
This...Is...Awesome!.
Woot woot! Great chapter!
Fuck you for making me horny, but thank you for making a great and comedic battle scene to make up for it.
I love your righting style.
and this story is fucking amazing
*fist pumps* HELL YEAH!!
Not too noticeable, I caught it on my second read.
Oooh, that was long and very pleasurable to go through. In fact, it felt shorter than it actually is, but the intensity of the whole time I've spent with it is more than enough compensation.
Aaaand Nigel is prevented from having a good, complete fuck. Again. His dear cheeselegs is likely to have the blue balls herself at this point!
This will only be better if the elk idiots have a huge load of cheese for the Crystal Empire to loot
The elk are so fucked XD
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... Well, 19,000 words. I had to screw something up.
DAMMIT NO! Cliffhanger! I hope Cadence and Shining were woken up by Reflection to see Nigel get blasted open but then get back up. I also hope you send out the next chapter in less than two weeks because of the sheer cliff hanger....
I know they will win and all, but come on, the bloody brutality and the reactions to it are what makes this so awesome!
Either way, full of win and loving it.
I did spot two grammatical errors, so I guess ill just leave them under here. May be more, but I didn't really pay much attention.
That should be we'll.
and at some point in the story, you accidentally swapped Nigel with Shining while Nigel was showing some affection for Reflection. Too lazy to find it, but somebody else will probably do it for you.
Peace.
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Well, firstly, thanks for the comment.
However, with this line:
It is 'will' as Nigel said:
So if you put it together:
"And the rate of production will be incredibly fast." (Golden finished it for him.)
I wonder if the UIP will actually find Nigel...... I hope Klaus doesn't happen to be there.... Crazy asshole strapped a missile launcher to a changeling.....
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Thought he said that as if he was doing something, not confirming it.
Guess not, sorry about that.
(The fact you didn't address the other part of my comment slightly worries my, but I won't rush, tis rude to rush. )
Fall of Equestria just got bitch slapped .37.media.tumblr.com/54e8b889016a662eef76bbd2a5b95712/tumblr_merzgkM1nd1r4cfazo1_250.gif
I feel like this should be replaced with
instead. I just think it's a bit more... Nigel.
Chalmers unit manual:
Section 4: Mode 2
Your chalmers unit will enter mode 2 if you Chet it, it enters a drunken rampage, or you expose it to too much pure awesomeness.
Suggested course of action: Kill yourself. now. Before he does it.
Well that made me grin. Also I was expecting Nigel to taunt them by saying he'll mount the Firstborn's severed head in the throne room. I hope he does do this.
Oh, and when he had the elk's head in his grasp I really expected him to just rip it straight off.
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Is it true? Have a found someone else who actually knows that referance?
4276855 Yes, my soul brother. We have found each other at last.
That elk was a smeghead.
Nigel M. Chalmers, the new Saxton Hale. It's official. It's confirmed. There is no stopping him.
I read this all in an hr..........
no I didn't time it
At first i thought he would just instakill the elk with a nice riposte, after the magic incident i predicted he would just snap his neck and threaten to eat them all.
I was not disappointed.
That sucks.. I hope we see more Chalmers in the future.. He is probably one of my favorite human protagonists I have ever read!
Can someone please continue this story after he has finished it
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Great chapter. I like what you've done so far. Hope you keep the chapters coming. Definitely a favorite.
The Infantry Suppression thing is a good idea. One of the tactics in The Art of War is, when your enemy charges, meet their charge with your own. You don't want to take the full force of an enemy charge while standing still, basically. The suppression system will force the enemy to take the full brunt of a Crystal Empire charge as well as prevent them from maneuvering to counter flanking elements.
4409984 heh, it allows them to sit back and mow down infantry, and be effective anti aircraft defenses, using a very cheap and very available source of ammo. They charge, and it will be very hard to miss. The (moose/ponies/ddogs/whatever) will use ww2 tactics (which, in the early days of ww2 amounted to "charge at the machine guns screaming and pointing your rifle") and will die rather quickly.
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/e/ed/Stoke_Me_a_Clipper_%28Red_Dwarf%29.jpg Gummy was brainwashed by the Nazi ponies to become a ruthless killing machine. In the end, Gummy repaid the man who shared his kippers and cheese, regurgitating nutrients from his superhuman metabolism, to help Gummy regenerate his pulled-out teeth.
I can't wait to see the BBQ he is going to have!
Still waiting....
Don't fuck with a naked man
In the original story with Nigel weren't ponies considered delicacies to the griffons?
Despite this I find your stories quite enjoyable.
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Yes, but keep in mind that each fic isn't in the same universe so to speak. Each one varies in headcanon, events etc.
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Working on the next one now.
Yay and NOO! I caught up we'll it 3:33 am and I have school tomorrow. Curse you story for being so good!!!:yay
I thought I couldn't like this anymore than I already did, then you pull out the Ace Rimmer line. Why can I only thumbs up this once?
“Just think Iron, you’re lucky that I didn’t drop the class to do something useless like ‘Diplomacy and Negotiation Training’.”
Bro points? I lost it there...
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Yeeh, just think, he does good now, what if he had taken the class? My guess is Equestria would be anaxed by the Empire in a couple weeks.
I'm dying...
YES! Finally! Potato wedges are the best! Don't know why the Equestrians are so hell bent on their hay fries.