Something made it to the returned Crystal Empire before Shining and Cadence, that something not being at all pleased with its current situation.
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Man the dream with his other version or clone or doppelganger w/e was awesome to envision in my head ... ill have such sweet dreams this morn after not sleeping for so long.
Hope my dreams are that sinister ... least the luna and the doppelganger part ...
So, if you serve the UIP well, there is a chance of Immortality? That is a very good incentive for loyalty and service. I'm guessing the Emperor is also immortal?
...Is he the God-Emperor of 40k?
...Is Nigel M. Chalmers a Next Generation Space Marine/Imperial Guardsman?
...Did you just blow my mind? SPOILERS: yeah, totally.
much word
wee progress
wow
First off, at the * there needs to be a comma.
Second, this is the single most hilarious thing I have ever heard regarding King Sombra.
What if Luna tells what she saw to Celestia and they plan an invasion to take down Chalmers?
It was not nice of her to spy on his dreams anyway. Stupid habit.
Nice word count : D, i am very happy.
Also the dream sequence was really nicely done and the fact that the double was really him, something somethingh PTSD. I also loved how Luna got completely terrified while Nigel was like, this dude again.....cmon i just want to sleep.
Waiting for Nigel to find out that Luna has been spying on him in his sleep.
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Nah, no PTSD here, just business as usual. Did you figure out what triggered it?
Great chapter.
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Thanks, I kinda rambled on at the start, got stuck and then thought 'why not one of those dream things that seem to be the craze?'. A few hours later and boom, that was done. Might have gone a bit overboard with it though.
3939403 they MIGHT understand that even the kindest person,When thrown through hell,Can have very dark thoughts,Its acting on them that matters
3940491 would be funny if nigel made the dream just to fuck with luna
the chapters named Mind Your Own Business think about it.
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Yeah, sometimes I do tend to drag things out a little. I just think that 'X did this then he went straight to do this then did this' etc can really ruin a fic. My pacing is something I have to work on but next chapoter should have a fair amount of stuff happen. Probably will start increasing the average chapter length from 2000 to 4000.
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Sorry to disappoint but no, Nigel is unaware that Luna can even see dreams. To be honest i don't think anymore could have been done to freak her out.
3940659 How long do you plan on making this story?(And the others)
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Well, this one about 90,000 - 100,000, S&D about 70,000/80,000
C&C about 50,000-70,000 while PP and P about 80,000/90,000.
3940719 I'm just sitting here and wondering what your endgame for NMC, E will be, apart from Princess Cadence growing old in a room whilst eating ice cream and feeling sorry about herself for not being able to fulfill her "destiny".
Wow. Nearly nothing fazes this guy. And Luna should know better than to pry.
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I doubt that Nigel has PTSD, he enjoys all that terrible stuff too much for that.
what i would like to know however is how old he is exactly, immortality may be reserved for the upper ranks but im convinced he has at least some serious life prolonging treatments behind him including his genetic augmentation.
3940669 so the crystal ponies didnt tell him befire the meeting any info on the princesses?
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How would they know? It's been a thousand years, Sombra was in control of the Empire for a while and they are not exactly well-versed in other nations. The knowlage of Equestria would be very basic if remembered at all, Luna's tendency to observe dreams could be dissmissed as fairytales or just the Equestrians talking big about their rulers.
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Let's just say that for a human that appears to be in his late twenties he's reached a command rank in an intelligence department, something you would think would take a while. I will of course reveal more during the fic but for now i'm going to withold that infomation.
Which one?
which of your stories will you update next?
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PP and P.
It's time to get down and start commentating!
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That ending. That fucking ending!! Good job sir you deserve a cookie
*cookie machine is empty*
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That depends on the context
( were out of cookies sorry, (not really))
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I rather like my picture of pictures that hang on my wall, but pictures of stairs sound promising.
( still out of cookies, still not sorry )
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*Random Changeling Mare Dance Party Activated*
( cookie machine refilled, enjoy )
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yay
3940809 Nice rhymes.
3944645 holy shit! How did I not notice tht before?! I seriously didn't even notice I did that.
OK, I WILL EAT MORE FUCKING VITAMINS!
Odd, that seems to be Chatter's line....
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How so?
3963779 It seemed that Chatter would be saying something, since he just figured out the Emperor's idea, and it isn't exactly out of character for him to get excited with a way to escape the hospital.
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Ah, but the Emperor saw that Chatter had figured out what he had figured out so he felt the need to confirm that yes, they were indeed going to escape the hospital by climbing out the window. The fact that Chalmers is supposed to be the Emperor and such activities are uncommen for rulers just make it funnier.
Also to be fair it fits perfectly with Nigel's character to help someone escape by climbing through a window just for kicks, doubly so when dressed in his underware.
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After the sheer power shown by the humans in that dream, the princesses would be more likely to grovel than fight him. That is, if they have any brains/sense of self-preservation. Luna might also have picked upon the fact that he genuinely did not care about the ponies being massacred (except, maybe, for the crystal ponies as they are "his"). His loyalty is to the UIP, specifically to humanity. Chalmers has repeated this (well, the narrator has). So, if he was ordered right now to kill everything on the planet, he'd probably do it in style.
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Well a few things, i'll PM them though so as to not spoil things.
Wow. You took that to the extreme.
I like it.
I like how that's all he has to say
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Same thought that occured to me after reading the last sentence
Luna is a sleeper creeper.
Holy poop what did I just read.
So Chalmers has some sort of weird entity just living there in his mind? HOW DOES THAT EVEN WORK??????
5191621 magic!
So first meeting with Luna and Chalmers is gonna be like this: rs137.pbsrc.com/albums/q237/FuzzyFurvert/Image%20Macros/180352__UNOPT__safe_princess-luna_image-macro_caption_vulgar_reaction-image_what-the-fuck-is-this-shit_zps8b2c2495.png~320x480
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Snort snort
6045040 *Magic*
Penis: Hey dude.
Brain: What?
Penis: let fuck that pony.
Brain: WHAT!? THAT SICK!
Penis: You need get laid man...It been 1 years. you need to fuck something.
Brain: I don't know...
Heart: Cmon let fuck! That pussy...
Penis: Join us...
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The music I heard was the music from meet the pyro when he's burning down the town.
This one
https://youtu.be/SBtEKKKaw6s
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“Magic.” *Snort Snort.*
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He literally mentioned his species had their own version of magic.