Something made it to the returned Crystal Empire before Shining and Cadence, that something not being at all pleased with its current situation.
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I must say that this is a great piece of work bit small but you are doing very well. it saddens me that this has so few likes but mark my words I will get people to read this. I am loving the changeling merging with the crystal ponies. Please update soon!
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I try to release a new chapter for at least one of my fics every day, keep in mind this story is not even that old. Thanks for the praise, and i care more about the ratio of likes to dislikes then then total likes themselves. Ill put it this way, my two fics have about 566 views and i already have over 180 favs. I count that as a win, i thank all my readers as everysingle one of the comments i have been given have either been constructive or just a laugh to read.
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Sorry, i ran out of combat steriods for today, check back tomorrow.
The united Empire of Chalmer
Edit :Or the Chaldmeri Dominion
Wow not the best way to make a first impression Candace.
Will the other Princesses and the Mane six be planning any part in this story later?
Awesome story so far!Can´t wait to see how powerful the Crystal Empire becomes under the guidance of one crazy human.
I can already imagine the punishment for Cadence-she will be returning to Eqestria with poodle haircut.
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I plan to make this one quite long, and lets just say that Nigel is not the most... ideal nieghbor.
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So far this is amazing! With all the HIE I have not seen one where a human was put in charge of the Crystal Empire and so far its really good, just please don't kill Candace!
Beyond that so far I like the flow and Nigel is fun and I really look forward to what happens next!
Well. All I have to say is...
LEL.
The plot thickens!
Btw, what is the penalty for assault where Nigel is from? It would be awesome if Cadence was thrown in jail I mean, she did just attack a citizen that Nigel swore to protect, so I imagine him taking it quite a bit more personally than he would had she attacked his own person.
I always wanted a pet alicorn...
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I've always wanted a stuffed bear for my room. I guess I'll have to go with an Alicorn instead...
Hahahahahaha. I expected Shining to be the one to be the one to attack the Changeling, but it works great with Cadance too. I can't wait for the argument between Nigel and Cadance.
Oh no she didn't!
What will Chalmers do? Give Cadence a "Reason you suck" speech or do something epic that involves cheese?
Loving this so far . The protag is so random and fun i cant help but laugh at his antics .
Also will he ever return to his world or manage to reestablish contact with it or is he stranded?
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I can't reveal that i'm afraid, would spoil the fun.
Anyway. i'm working on the enxt chapeter now and i expect to have it up later today. (I'm AUS though so that may be different for you)
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No probs i understand
Damn you time zones , you spoil my fun yet again.
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4188391 Classic! I love the pun
YES! WOO HOO, YAY WHY AM I CHEERING? Oh wait ah ACTION
I rather like this story and the fact that cadence was arrested for assaulting a changling, Im rather excited to see where you go from here with the story and as always thanks for posting ^-^
Cadence, Cadence, Cadence. Now what did we say about being racist to changlings?
Godd job so far, by the way. Keep it up!
Cadence dun goofed, also I love how Nigel has not just gone 'duhhh, kill changelings on sight while I become lord and saviour of the universe and have sex with the mane six' its nice to see what a (relatively) normal human will do in this situation.
Good job
Ooooh, Cadence is in trouble!~
Oh my man...that fucking funny shit i ever hear.
I swear to god, that sombra-soul still been T-bag alots by a PONY, HAHAAGAH.
So Nigel is having a chat with the princess... Although.. Will he ask for operation "Table Leg" to be put in place?
Bring me my Table Leg?
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In an alternate universe, I'd expect him to use said leg for a different purpose, as far as Cadence is concerned... ;>
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doesnt nigel absolutely hate rape, if you're talking about him shoving it up her ass