Something made it to the returned Crystal Empire before Shining and Cadence, that something not being at all pleased with its current situation.
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I just woke up and a few minutes after I see this.
Ps. Will we get to see any crystal unicorn/pegasus foals in the future?
3639610 What if...Equestrians are really just the offspring of crystal ponies and changelings?
They get wings, horns and duller coats from the changelings
And they don't have holes in their legs cause crystals!
Never mind me, just having random thoughts that make no sense
Well, time to go to bed WHATS THIS?! A new chapter? Damn, now I have to read it
At first - after having read 'Savior or Destroyer' - I was like "Oh, god, not this guy again!" Then after reading this one... I'm impressed. Nigel seems like a decent, competent Emperor; a good ruler for the Crystal Ponies. I'm liking this!
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He can be responsable when he wants to, in Saviour and Destroyer he was stuck sitting in a command room in deep space for months, that sort of inactivity is un-healthy for a pyscopath.
In this fic he becomes Emperor after killing the former ruler in a tide of bloodshed, improving his mood. Plus, lets face it, everyone of us would love to become Emperor of the Crystal Empire.
He may be unbalenced but he is a loyal soldier and he can clearly see the advantage of having a foothold on a new planet that he did not need to conquer to claim (You know, exept for the whole Sombra thing). He just needs an outlet for all of the 'creative' energy, managing and developing a small Empire is just the ticket.
So Cadence gave Shining a shiner? How barbaric. She should have time in the pillory, but with faeces thrown at her!
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No, he walked into a door, nothing happened at all, nothing at all...
3640374 Thing is,Chalmers here actually CAN be serious,And chances are he's a commander for a reason
I sort of expected for Shining to snap at Cadence, after she said, "Don't bother coming up tonight".
Like, "Don't worry, I won't."
Cue hurt look from Cadence, and her inevitable storming off.
Great chapter. So Celestia now know's about the situation. What are her exact thought's on the matter? What will Luna and the mane six think when they find out? What will they all think of Nigel when they meet him?
3640434 Why is this chapter called "I Fell Down The Stairs" when he "walked into a door"? Will Shining give a different excuse the next time he tries explaining his black eye, causing others to suspect that he is lying?
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I was kinda abusing domestic violence for laughs (I know, i'm going straight to Hell) as 'I walked into a door' and 'I fell down the stairs' are steryotypical excuses to explain your other half giving you a shiner, exept that in this situation Shining was the one who got whalloped. I like to think that Cadence is the one who wears the pants, as i think having a military officer being bossed around by his pink wife is hilarious
3645407 Will this story become a tribute to domestic violence? Because that would be an amazing twist. Just at the end of a chapter, put a help-line in there.
bro this........is a masterpiece i cant even speak now plssss write more
Nice dude. Got a little comedy, some drama, a bit of romance, and it all fits well together. Can't wait for next chapter.
I like this chapter, now I go to the toilet and bugger off to bed cause it's 6:20 fucking am.
Well fuck you very much, Cadence. If you think Shining wants to get some tonight after what you did, you're gonna have a dry-nether surprise.
3645407 Normally I hate domestic violence with a hellish passion, but this time, I'm gonna laugh at it Shiny really shouldn't have provoked her after the whole shenanigan was over.
The authour must not be a fan of Cadence. She a bit of a spoiled brat in this one...... I love it!
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I used to 'walk into doors' and 'fall down the stairs' all the time when my big sister babysat
I read the part where Shining got the bruise and immediately thought abuse but then thought ,this is My little Pony fiction so She might have done it on accident or something(I mean they just got married).Then.....
SPOILER!!!!!!
WOW !Abuse ! (Its probably horrible I was so excitedly shocked)
5865903 Yeah Jesus Christ.
Cadence is acting like a spoiled child here. Assuming that she's never acted this way before, I'd give her a month before I divorced her.
If she has acted this way before, I'd dump her on the spot.
Never go to bed angry at your spouse
So she really would do this? She said herself that they are not truly evil and to kill them because ponies fear them... I mean, just to do a genocide because of fear is incredibly foolish of her.
I'm glad Shining is there. He seems to be the only reasonable pony in command.
6623866 Agreed; I am ashamed of the Celestia of this story.
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Well in dropbear story’s celestia is a subject loving moron if one of her subjects get hurt she gets all fussy and if killed gets pissed or cry’s all day
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In her defence it seemed more like she was only going to do it for lack of alternatives.
Domestic abuse, hooray!
The last several chapters have all missing dots and comas at the end of quotes and paragraphs. Just to let you know wherever you get around to editing this story.
Otherwise it is nothing which would hinder the story in any way.