The Show is Never Over

The Great and Powerful Trixie is suffering after her embarrassing defeat in Ponyville. Her act was mainly impressive due to her confidence, but with that gone no pony would spare her the time of day. Now, own in the dumps, Trixie is barely getting by. However, could an encounter with a certain DJ change her whole life?

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Stalin the Stallion

Stalin the Stallion #1 · Mar 15th, 2012 · · · All for Show ·

I like your writing style. While Stalin is not a fan of Trixie, story is still interesting and enjoyable. Grammar is fine Pacing is good. Descriptions are good. Keep the good work!

DJ-Otakon

DJ-Otakon #2 · Mar 15th, 2012 · · · All for Show ·

Wow......this is going to be interesting.
I have to say your writing style is very good in this fic and it is a good read. T'was a good way to end it too. Looking forward to the next chapter.

-DJ-Otakon

Pickle

Pickle #3 · Mar 15th, 2012 · · · All for Show ·

Thanks. With how our whole society is selfconcious about everything they do I am pleased to deem this a success! I've been wanting to write a story with Trixie In it for awhile and finally got around to it. The best part was I finished this chapter wanting to begin working on the next one immedianly!

Thanks for reading everypony!

NotABrony1

NotABrony1 #4 · Mar 15th, 2012 · · · All for Show ·

This looks promising
Tracked

gapaot

gapaot #5 · Mar 16th, 2012 · · · All for Show ·

Wow, story where Trixie's downfall is believeable but not overdone. Good plot, and nice DJ - hooray for Vinyl! Tracking, ofc

Pickle

Pickle #6 · Mar 16th, 2012 · · · All for Show ·

>>gapaot thanks

dark magshin

dark magshin #7 · Mar 19th, 2012 · · · All for Show ·

i like the story but you could definitely use a grammar check. things like "Trixie cleared her thought" need to be fixed, and i noticed a few lines of dialogue with similar errors. i'll be watching this all the same though

Celysus