I am unsure what to put here.... TO BE CONTINUED!
After one of Pinkie's half-baked ideas doesn't work out, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie find a fun, little prank that they can entertain themselves with for a bit. What seemed like an innocent joke at first, swiftly spirals out of control. Can the two mares repair the damage that's been done?
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So hey everypony! I would just like to state that this is my second fanfic and my first sad one. I took a risk writing a sad fic because I'm not too much of a touchy person. I just kinda found myself writing this. I'm not sure if it came out well, but that's what you all are here for!
Please leave any comments, feedback, or corrections you have. ALL IS WELCOME! Please someone read it and give me corrections! I'm in dire need of pre-readers so hit me up if that interests you. Also, tell me if you think this story even deserves a 'sad' tag. Looking back, i'm a little skeptical. I'm not good a labeling...
I am right now working on the first chapter of a comedy/crossover fic. I've told few about it, but it should be interesting. I will actually be working on my competition piece for the next few days, so yeah... Once i get that completed, I shall progress with chapter 3 of "What Would Rainbow Dash Do...", my other story. It's a light-romance/comedy with ScootaDash! If that intrigues you, check it out.
On my last note, I would love suggestions for stories. If you like my writing (hopefully one pony does) then send me an idea. I might just work on it. Well I better get started on this AP US History study guide I got due tomorrow. Good night Everypony!
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Keep this on!
All of my stars. Have them.
Seriously though, you've made an awesome job. Especially with the friendship report, this is the first story I've read that has a serious (and meaningful) friendship report/moral. Nice idea, nice writing, nicely done.
In my opinion, though, this doesn't really need the "sad" tag, as the sadness is almost absent. Mind you: this is not to be considered as a flaw.
Favorited & five stars!
You get five stars!
YAY! Thanks you two! Really appreciate the ratings and comments.
HA! I gotcha! Hey jerkbag,
in paragraph 27 Pinkie says "Dashie! Dash, what are doing back---” THAT DOESN'T MAKE SENSE! 
I am best reviewer! 
Seriously though, this fic is very heartfelt. I'm touched.
338683 LOL yeah it's k, but I need to work on it because I want it EQD. Apparently though, Pinkie Pie saying "Dashie" isn't canon so I can't include that.
Also, there's a big flaw in my story because Pinkie Pie didn't want to prank Fluttershy in Griffon the Brush Off, but in this story she has no objection to it. 
Your correction will be made post-haste though!
***** 5 stars my good sir.