Applejack and Rainbow Dash, dating in secret, finally find the opportunity to spend some "quality" time alone together. When Scootaloo shows up, happy and unannounced, what are the two marefriends to do? Play laser tag with the filly, of course.
The Canterlot elite have declared Rainbooms the new "in" thing. A monopoly on high culture makes Rainbow Dash the happiest pony around, of course. Really. She's happy.
3451002 I'm glad you enjoyed! I'm still just a student and I've been improving on my writing skill! Please keep checking back on my page as I'll bigger and better stories in the future! :D
Comment for everyone: Please like the story if you like it because all the dislikes are VERY depressing and I don't need anymore depression than I already have...
3459649 In case you're new to FIMFiction.net: expect a dozen automatic dislikes on whatever Appledash story you're going to post. They're usually from the same people who won't even read your story, let alone give you constructive criticism.
3473226 Thank you sir. I'm new to posting, but I've been reading for a while. I'll only take comments seriously. People like you are why the world hasn't been over run with chaos! You rock! Have a great day!
It's a bit of a train wreck at the very end with this... but a great story
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That was a cute story, no lie.
that is an adorable story, I must admit.
3439251 Thanks!
It is a good story I wish it had some more time to develop, but I still liked it
3451002 I'm glad you enjoyed! I'm still just a student and I've been improving on my writing skill! Please keep checking back on my page as I'll bigger and better stories in the future! :D
Comment for everyone: Please like the story if you like it because all the dislikes are VERY depressing and I don't need anymore depression than I already have...
3459646 I understand and I will
3459663 You're awesome!
3459649
In case you're new to FIMFiction.net: expect a dozen automatic dislikes on whatever Appledash story you're going to post. They're usually from the same people who won't even read your story, let alone give you constructive criticism.
3473226 Thank you sir. I'm new to posting, but I've been reading for a while. I'll only take comments seriously. People like you are why the world hasn't been over run with chaos! You rock! Have a great day!