The story book villain

Propaganda is a powerful thing. She took my crimes, my failures, and turned them into a wives tail. Into something you tell your foals to get them to come inside at night. Be good or Nightmare moon will come and eat you up. She did this so when I came back they would not fear me. They would not know me as a monster, just a story book villain.

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Homeward bound · 12th Jul 2015 · 2,817 words
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The Sun Room · 15th Aug 2015 · 2,524 words
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Butterwings

Butterwings #1 · Jul 14th, 2015 · · · Homeward bound ·

Celestia the Solar Flair, the flame knight of Azmar.

A flair? Is that like a flail and a flare combined?

CtrlAltElite

CtrlAltElite #2 · Jul 15th, 2015 · · · Homeward bound ·

6203645 Na like a person who can't spell. ^^

Butterwings

Butterwings #3 · Jul 16th, 2015 · · 1 · Homeward bound ·

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Leaving peaces of the caster in a line from the start point to the end.

Yep, so they teleported just leaving peace and harmony behind them.
Pieces, perhaps?

to have the job if figuring

It's "of". Sweet celestia, you really can't spell.

She's Celies student she must be smarter then that,

Should be
She's Celly's student, she must be smarter than that,
Or maybe Celie's if you want, but really I've never seen anyone shorten it to Celie instead of Celly.

... after that I sortof got bored and CTRL+W'd the tab, so..

jbwjr

jbwjr #4 · Aug 16th, 2015 · · · Homeward bound ·

I did't have a lot of options she-

I didn't have

your welcome, question how is this dark or do I need to keep reading?

jbwjr

jbwjr #5 · Aug 17th, 2015 · · · The Sun Room ·

ok... so Luna is dead? but... "brain .exe has stopped working" i'm confused

CtrlAltElite

CtrlAltElite #6 · Aug 19th, 2015 · · · The Sun Room ·

6329724 I have always found it odd that she's just up there for a thousand years starving to dead. So I just decided to make her undead. (not rly brain dead though that would be fun to write.) As for dark, we will get there we just have to get through all the pleasantries. It will be more in the past then in the present, because the present is not a very dark place, but we'll get there.

enderchangling