Cadence's view of love changes
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Damn, I was planning on studying... Oh well
Things be getting good! Why must this story keep getting better!
Hmm I can tell that whatever is going on tomorrow shiny will have the seeds of jealousy in his heart.
Well, who knew that Twilight's mom is a bitch?
Poor Cadence, she needs 20oz of ice cream stat!
and now I wait
One step closer to abandoning Shining Armor. Seriously, he just keeps fucking up and fucking up.
If Ares and Cadence don't get together by the end of this I'm going to feel so cheated...
Ares is such a good person. He doesn't try to take advantage of the situation. Nor, does he go hard on Shiny, even though Cadence very upset with him. Ares is a such a bro. This is a very organic transition between relationships, does not seem forced at all, well done. I love this story!
How do you make a cute/sad/happy scene turn so freaking hilarious in just a single sentence!?
Oh man, their relationship is really built on mutual trust and respect. Things that shining is royally fucking up. He is taking their relationship for granted. Because he already has her love, he doesn't keep up the things lovers need to do to keep their relationship strong. Though I don't envy his position, he really needed to defend cadence, but fighting with your parent who you also love is never easy.
Ohhhh snap
Goddamn, the way you make each is just...Damn.
it's finally happening YEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I don't. I talk about the big ass catfish I got on the line!
That was one really intense chapter. While I didn't like the one-eighty Velvet pulled there all that much from being sweet lady to satanic poon, I kind of expected it to go that way. I think it needed to anyways for the story as a whole to work so good work there. I would have suggested that her hatred be more suble/subdued/evil mind game/Mr. Burns etc instead of outright psychotic break down but that's just a nitpick detail.
Another thing is Cadence. When I first started reading this story, I got the impression that Shinning would be a cold-hearted schmo that would eventually drift away from Cadence and the marriage leaving her empty enough to drift to Ares. Now it seems like she's the one that's driving the wedge while he's trying (though failing) to keep things together. Yeah there's a lot of drifting though and it started exactly as I expected but the transition moved a round a little. Maybe Shinning will start that cold drift, just not quite so soon. Idk...
Again, that's just another nitpick detail. Something that I didn't expect. Overall, this is still a very good story with excellent pacing. It's a little sad and heart warming at the same time and the way you portray Cadence just melts the heart. I love this; keep up the good work!
I like the character/relationship buildup for Ares and Cadance.
Shining just dropped the ball hard on this one. Sure its a minefield for him, but he bent when he should have stood. So i guess its pretty much there that their couple ends.
At least when Ares and Candy end up together there wont be that "pressure" (in and out of the couple) to get a foal. Both are effectively sterile due to what they are.
Great chapter!
3960793 He just needs to fuck up maybe one or two more times till she break up with him.
3960800 Same here.
So wait, Ares was walking bare foot the whole day, and he JUST notice's.
And now the waiting begins again, I can foresee Luna and Celestia asking Ares for another diddling session in the foreseeable future, that and will Ares get his shoes back? hopefully not, will Purple Smart ask him more questions? more than likely. Ares getting himself in trouble again? Oh hell yea.
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I would be devastated and if this was a real life romantic comedy like the girls watch I would watch it as soon as it came out and that is a lot to say for myself (im not very dedicated to stuff)
Y'know, it's heartbreaking to see this wedge being drove in between Candy and Velma in a disarming sort of way. I was fully expecting them to break up at some point when you posted that first chapter, but I don't think I was prepared for your execution of the plot-bunny. Its slow, painful and downright cruel...
Yet entirely natural. Everything in this story feels organic to me, from Ares' PTSD to the incompatibility of alicorns and other ponies. And the feels... Good god the feels...
Keep it up. However you're coming up with this stuff, be it through reading sappy novels or via some nefarious ritual, it's a good read.
Good chapter as always, the transitions and such are really pretty slick this time I have to say.
Cheers, Null
P.S. I still hate you, little big pony, every time this gets updated that goddamn song gets stuck in my brain. You're lucky this is a good fic...
wow new side to twilight's mother great chapter
Dunno why, but when I think about Ares, the only guy who comes to my mind is Owen Wilson...
Oh this is getting good.
dude! shining! wtf!?
Just so you know lad/lass, Ol' Kefka here is rooting for the Ares/Cadence/Shining Armor OTP. Just think about it little big pony it would be glorius.
Other than that I only have one thing to say about this story.
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Ares reminds me of myself.
His friends ask for advice he can't give, and he only realises something very important at the end of the day XD
I like it!
SO Close to Actual Tears here!!
But NO! I pushed on like a Trooper and hardened the Fuck up
Even though it was really difficult
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me every time a new chapter of this is posted:
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"Shuddered."
Sorry, but that one really bothers me.
THE SCRUNCH!!!!
Also, another great chapter as always. I'm really liking the way these relationships are developing.
One of the best and saddest things about this story is that I can like and understand this version of Shiny. He has the best intentions, but takes too much on himself and doesn't handle emotional shocks well, especially when there is no immediate action he can take to fix things.
He's a good guy, and despite their rough start, him and Ares are becoming friends. Which just makes his mistakes and Cadence's drifting away all the sadder.
I love this story!
Mother in law, nothing is good enough.
Shining Armor,i.imgur.com/yu2NSVU.jpg
Ah the process of this is great! Its not the topical "Bad guy, sweet girl, nice guy" crap, and I like that Ares isn't trying to take advantage of her moments of weakness and vulnerably, and it's her heart that is drifting to the one that is there for her.
Shining<<<<<<<<<<<<<Cadence>>Ares
1-2 steps away before her heart overwhelms what is "right or wrong" and she acts on it... Shining YOU FUCKED UP
great chapter
"tightening my rear legs around his lower midsection so he wouldn’t escape from my wraith."
and now i firmly believe that Cadence has command over an army of ghosts!
...Well, shit got real. Things escalated quickly too.
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She's not a bitch. Believe it or not but I can see where she's coming from. She's an overprotective, overbearing mother, and all the good ones act exactly the same way. No one is good enough for their children.
On the religious beliefs of old testiment jews, that is grossly inaccurate.
Damn, this is one of the rare few stories that make me really happy.
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Shit escalated quickly. Also, things got real.
Honestly, I'm surprised Ares didn't get physical with Velvet.
I've had that happen before, my friend invited me to his house to try and make things easier when his parents met his fiancé, his mother (more or less) acted the same way Velvet did... Long story short, it ended up with my hands around my friend's waist to keep him from strangling his own mother.
Yes! I was so happy to see this updated after looking at my favorites list.
Once again, I love how you've been developing everything, and I applaud how natural everything is. The ponies seem remarkably in-character, you do a great job of showing instead of simply telling, and everything just flows; especially the relationship between Ares and Cadence. At this point, the only thing I can say is that I eagerly look forward to the next update, and hope it's just as good (and, with your record, I'm not at all worried about it being anything but great).
All that said, nothing is perfect. Excuse me for being blunt, but everything good I just said about the characterization for this story? Take that, multiply it by a million, and make it negative. That's just about how bad the characterization for Twilight Velvet was. Seriously though, I was shocked at the complete flip in personality that came out of nowhere. Remember the earlier chapters where I said it seemed like you were forcing Shining to act like a complete dick for the sole purpose of allowing the story to be possible? Well, the good news is that you did eventually solve that issue and now Shining Armor seems just as in-character as the others, which is great. The bad news is that you're doing the exact same thing with Twilight Velvet. Literally, the exact same problem Shining had at first (acting horrible seemingly because the story needed him to) is now a problem with Twilight Velvet. I could accept a small amount of resentment, and I didn't really mind the glares and other minor things, but this? No, it seems the story needed a way to drive the two closer together, and instead of coming up with a way to make that happen at the dinner without having Twilight Velvet become a complete monster (maybe have her bring up the fact that they couldn't have children without actually meaning to, making it more of an accidental fight), the story just used her as a sacrificial lamb to drive the plot along.
I'm sorry, but as much as I loved this chapter and the growing relationship between Cadence and Ares (finally! ) as well as how he defended her (again, great work with Shining. Sure, it's easy to accuse him without considering how hard it must have been for him to pick between two ponies he cares for greatly), I just absolutely despise what was done to Velvet's characterization. I think what confuses me the most is where this came from. I mean, during the wedding it shows Velvet and Night Light, and both of them look perfectly happy with the marriage. Now, I could still understand a little resentment (as I mentioned earlier) with her son leaving, but to the point where she acts like she does in this chapter?
No.
Just, no.
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No, I've seen such parents tear families apart. I should know: My aunt was one of those who always felt that she knew best for me: It finally ended with a near-split in the family between her and almost everybody else. Her five children are stifled in their home because she keeps them there all the time: Never allowed interaction with other kids, and they are homeschooled in any case. Such parents that are overprotective only earn the scorn of their children because they wish to keep 'Their' children sheltered, as if they were property at times.
I've seen it in my life, and in the lives of many of my friends.